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Author Name: Premiumlionheart 12 Comments
Date Added: June 15, 2008 13:06:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sun and Fate
                    Leave us O brilliant sphere
                    You have been near,
                    Cradled the land
                    And shown your care.
                    Vines have borne their harvest;
                    Naked limbs are seen
                    Instead of green
                    Fields are silent, cold and bare.
                    Streams have had their pleasure
                    But shiver now
                    And twist away
                    Soon to stay,
                    Cold and hard in icy stares.
                    Leave us O brilliant sphere.
                    Leave us here
                    To face the frozen
                    Wrathful wind.
                    We have no choice but to await
                    You...our fate.
 
 
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on July 13, 2008 10:28:02 AM Report
Richard you may not be on this earth plane to read my comment, but i know that you are reading this from heaven and I would like to say it was a pleasure knowing you and having you as a very special friend. When my time comes I hope you are right by my side holding my hand my beautiful man.

 

I love you dear heart

Comment By: FreeReborn on June 27, 2008 06:46:01 PM Report
....Amazing, a whole new spin on the very concept of winter!!! Amazing!!! Thank you for sharing this work!!

 

*~Reborn~*

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on June 17, 2008 11:12:46 PM Report
Excellent write Richard.
Helen

Comment By: Freeb doneff on June 17, 2008 04:33:09 PM Report
You have never lost your touch in the writing field.  Excellence  from anywhere you stand.
b

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on June 16, 2008 11:03:28 AM Report
  This one left chills up my spine for more than one reason.

Excellent penning Richard.

~Cindy xo

Comment By: FreeSteve on June 16, 2008 09:57:34 AM Report
The giver of light and the sustainer of life.  Excellent write Richard. 
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on June 16, 2008 01:22:15 AM Report
Excellent penning Richard and should our ever life giving sphere ever decide to leave us then I truly hope I'm not around to see it~Graham.
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 15, 2008 06:55:49 PM Report
Fate who knows what awaits us scarey ha??? I really enjoyed this very much love they way you words present themselves to the reader Excellent write
                         
                               Cathy

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 15, 2008 06:32:07 PM Report
Who knows what waits for us....Fate has the cards ...
 Love this....
 I need a nice bold tasty glass of wine ...how about you??
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeGlata on June 15, 2008 06:32:04 PM Report
Deep thoughts here, SP...and I enjoyed this! Our  fates are often at the whim of unseen forces.

Hugs and thinking here....

Sunshine

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on June 15, 2008 04:09:00 PM Report
Wonderfully written Ol'Dog..excellent!
Hugs,
Lil'One~

Comment By: FreeJoe on June 15, 2008 03:52:58 PM Report
Splendid penning, Our fate is in the wind, we only have to wait. Joe




 


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