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The Answer to Life~8

The Answer to Life

 

Each thought in my mind I put to the test

Looking for answers that may fit the best
Explaining the knowledge I still may not know

Like when we each die where all of us go

 

Some say heaven with streets of gold

Some say hell if your soul has been sold

Some say this is it when we reach the end

As for me I believe in the first 2 my friend

 

Lifeís what we make it so know thatís true

The direction of each day depends on you

So some will go bad and some will be great

Are you following this and can you relate

 

When things go wrong some come unglued

And then they canít hide their poor attitude

But things donít go better by losing your temper

Or by people hearing you constantly whimper

 

So I wrote this piece as a kind of reminder

To treat yourself and others a lot more kinder

Because believe it or not we must understand
Itís the answer to life still unsolved by man

Author's Notes:
Life is a mystery and is intended to be
We exist intertwining with our destiny
So finding the answers that matter to us
Is our challange before we're returned to dust
 
This is one I decided to repost
Peace~
James
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFlis R on December 13, 2008 02:19:15 AM Report
I haven't been around for a while,
and I'm so glad I picked this piece to read today.
Exactly what I need to hear, and as always put perfectly.
Take care xx

Comment By: FreeJennifer on December 7, 2008 09:40:05 PM Report
so this is a thinker... You have to be positive. Positive energy attracts Positive energy. You always carry such wisdom in your poems. You teach us all to THINK! life can be so hard. But it is up to us to change what we do not like. It is up to us to be Positive. You always inspire me!
Jen

Comment By: FreeMike on July 6, 2008 01:37:28 PM Report
Always profound! Great write, as usual!

 

Mike

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on July 6, 2008 08:47:08 AM Report
Wonderful sentiments James. Len is right...we search and search but who of us can say we know it all?

 

 

....I especially loved these lines:

When things go wrong some come unglued


And then they canít hide their poor attitude


But things donít go better by losing your temper


Or by people hearing you constantly whimper

Amen!!!

Hugs my friend

~Cindy

 

 


Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 4, 2008 05:01:01 PM Report
This touches on the same subject as your recent comment on my piece, James. The mystery of life is what makes it nothing less than a magical adventure. We are smart enough to ask the questions, but completely incapable of understanding the answers...len
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on June 28, 2008 08:06:49 AM Report
I always enjoy coming here James. Terrific piece with an awesome message. Joe
Comment By: FreeS on June 23, 2008 07:51:09 PM Report
brilliant write


Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on June 18, 2008 11:30:29 AM Report
Thank you for reposting this very wise poem. Life sure is a mystery and a puzzle for each of us to figure out. Every one's journey is unique and their own.
Helen

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on June 15, 2008 02:56:46 AM Report
This is a message many will do well to remember, life is for living but its the way you live it that counts, in this world and the next, well put indeed James a pleasure to read~Graham.
Comment By: FreeKimber Turpin on June 15, 2008 02:51:37 AM Report
James, I am glad you reposted this poem. Aside from it being wonderfully written - It has one hell of a message for all. This is going into my favorites, my friend.

Hugs to you and yours,
Gypsy

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 14, 2008 10:42:30 PM Report
We humans will always question and the different answers that satisfy will reflect upbringing, lifestyles, social status or religious beliefs of different people. Nothing is true...but believing it makes it so. Life is what we make it...I like that this poem ends on a positive note. =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: Freeryan on June 14, 2008 01:17:44 PM Report
very good james i love this you speak the truth and you do it so well
Comment By: FreeAmy on June 14, 2008 10:16:27 AM Report
"Life is a mystery and is intended to be".  I believe that wholeheartedly. Whether it's religion, space or a whole slew of other unknowns, I think there will always be things Man questions without finding the answer.

Nice write

~Amy 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 14, 2008 08:58:06 AM Report
James,
So glad you reposted this astonishing poem.. life is a gamble and you do have to know how to play the game or you lose over and over... Your words are words of a man who has lived them I respect you for that and you pour out your thoughts so others  will ponder your words that speak plain and simple with great emotions...We must save the very of life to the last...
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeCathy on June 14, 2008 08:39:50 AM Report
Thank you for reposting  Such a wise message within your wonderful words you are indeed a very wise man  Such truth to all you have written I loved this poem your rhyming and rthym are so very perfect also all in all just PERFECT
Cathy





 


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