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Author Name: Freecski 3 Comments
Date Added: June 11, 2008 23:06:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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One Car Followed

I saw a hearse being loaded

The escort carís lights went on

The precession pulled away

Only one car followed

 

 

No one rode in the hearse

Only one person was in the car

What happened with this life

That it deserved a single mourner

 

 

Did death finally bless a cursed life

Had everyone been pushed away

Was this person such a wretch

That only one could muster grief

 

 

Or does the mourner of others

Finally get to be mourned

 Is it now time to rest for one of the last

That has seen death time and time again

 

 

Either way it would seem this

Life was filled with sadness

I can only hope when my time comes

More than one car follows

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeStacy Lee on September 7, 2013 05:39:44 PM Report
That is sad. It also sends a message that we have to be aware of the people closest to us. Reaching out for help and asking for love is not a weakness.
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 12, 2008 09:43:48 AM Report
So do I . This is so sad you have touched your readers with your words The feeling through out the poem of  and awareness is amazing 
Cathy

Comment By: FreeAmy on June 11, 2008 11:36:31 PM Report
So sad...I think of stuff like this all the time.

A touching pen.

~Amy





 


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