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Author Name: Premiumlionheart 11 Comments
Date Added: June 10, 2008 21:06:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Triptych
Triptych
  
An ancient writing tablet or painting
consisting of three hinged leaves
permitting the two side panels
to be folded over the center one.  
  
Following are reposts of three
of my favorite romantic pieces
to form my "Triptych" of poems.  
   
  
Oneness 
 
Where night surrounds
And creates our dream
Of pure delight
Bewitched by air
Rhythmic with our murmerings;
Then endless echoes
Caught by winds that rush
Through slumbering night
Into dawn's sweet hush;
Passion moves our hips
And sings for us
Its breathless song.
  
 
Touches 
 
Touching each other
In myriads of ways
Sensual,
Physical,
Non-verbal;
Discovering one's need
Then granting favors
Releasing love,
The core of our beings. 
 
 
The Flame of Life 
 
I think there hides
Within your eyes
A dream of love's desire;
As the glowing candlelight
 tints your heart with fire.
Behind your gentle smile
There's a rush of deep regret
And wayward thoughts appear
Of why we never met.
I think there hides
Within your heart
Deep silence and sad tears;
For time and fate
Have kept you, oh so far from here.
I think before the candlelight
Invariably burns low
We'll know that love and destiny
Have kept the flame aglow.
 
 
  
 
  
  
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on July 13, 2008 10:34:28 AM Report
This was laying in my in box waiting to be read and felt from deep within. You will be so missed my dear heart and I want you to know that you were a gent and so very kind to all. You gave us support and love always. I will miss your poetry always so I have saved it all to always remind me of your beauty

 

Till we meet again dear heartxxxx

Comment By: FreeCathy on June 19, 2008 12:53:59 PM Report
You are definately a romantic all of the touched my heart your words so soft and beautiful how could they not touch the heart for that is where they came frome
......Cathy

Comment By: FreeAmy on June 16, 2008 12:40:25 AM Report
All three are beautiful....I especially love the last one.

A lovely penning X 3.

~Amy

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on June 12, 2008 03:00:21 AM Report
very nice choice too

 

Ali x

Comment By: FreeReborn on June 11, 2008 10:47:00 PM Report
OH, WOW!!! I love this Triptych!! that's a cool word too, triptych. Now that word will be stuck in my head for the next week or so....man, way to go, lionheart!!!!!!!!!!!! ;-)

 

*~Reborn~*

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on June 11, 2008 12:16:30 PM Report
Very touching writeOl'Dog-
Oneness touches the flame of life...unique and every so beautiful.
Hugs and many thanks for being you,
~Lil One

Comment By: FreeSteve on June 11, 2008 07:43:00 AM Report
Thanks for sharing these Richard.  Wonderful  words indeed.
Comment By: FreeGlata on June 11, 2008 05:31:47 AM Report
Three beautiful master pieces from the heart of the master...VERY amazing work, SP! As you can tell from the other responses, it's definitely a hit!

Hugs to ya...

Sunshine

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on June 11, 2008 01:43:35 AM Report
 

 

~sighs~  simply romantic, plain and simple

 

The Flame of Life was my favorite....truly I did sigh.

 

Lovely work Richard

~Cindy

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 10, 2008 10:15:36 PM Report
Richard,
 I am in awe as I read this twice... Your heart on every line... The flame of love how it burns.. This is a masterpiece  *****
 Simply the most beautiful poem you have ever written... Love is a joyous melody....
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on June 10, 2008 10:05:10 PM Report
Only you sweetheart........only you. This is most beautiful. I love

being able to look into the writers heart and in yours I can

see clearly that you have an abundance of knowledge, love and life.

Very interesting this I find. You simply amaze me without a doubt.

Hugs,

~Penny~





 


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