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Author Name: FreeBlueyd553 12 Comments
Date Added: June 09, 2008 09:06:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Stone
 
 
 
Stone, was his name...thatís how I remember him
A rock to cling to in my chastity
He saw me at the carnival, I was with my friends
He ask a girlfriend who I was
Wondered if he could have my number
I was in awe, He liked me!
Shy and self-conscious I cast my eyes to the ground
Whenever I  looked his way, he smiled
He told everyone I had the most beautiful eyes he had ever seen
Back at school he began to show up at the my home room
And as I came out of English Lit
He walked me to the next class, staring at me all the while
I saw his beautiful brown eyes shining for me
and I know I blushed
I do now, just thinking of those moments in the hall
He was the first boy I ever kissed and it was good
Innocent and pure, warm and comforting
He kissed me like he was afraid I would break
And I kissed him back, my heart beating wildly
I peeked once to see his face
I remember putting my fingers to my lips afterward
Trying to recapture that kiss,
At home in my bedroom, yes
I think I kissed my mirror, pretending it was him
Silly girls do such things
I donít remember why we parted,
But we did as most first loves do
Even now it is the sweetest of memories
My first kiss, my first love...and I will always treasure it.
Author's Notes:
it broke my heart when he moved away...not sure i remember why he did....but i shall never forget this innocence of my first love and my very first kiss

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTessa on July 15, 2008 10:53:59 PM Report
Where would we be without memories like these?

 

Tessa

Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on June 21, 2008 01:11:19 PM Report
Lovely Poem Cindy - I wouldn't have spoken to you when I was 16 - you'd have been too beautiful, too frightening, I'd have admired you from afar -written  your name on my bedroom wall and poems for you in my secret diary, dreamed of you, imagined that kiss but never said a word:-(

 

Warm Wishes

 

David Kx

Comment By: FreeCathy on June 18, 2008 06:06:15 PM Report
oh the first kiss  and the first love what a wonderful memory you imagery was so perfect you put me into the poem and I relived it with you You are a wonderful poet and I love reading your work
.......Cathy

Comment By: FreeAndy on June 10, 2008 11:31:34 AM Report
AWWWW this was prescious!  Great write!
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on June 9, 2008 08:12:58 PM Report

I always like how you let the reader into your poetry.  This one, I have to smile thinking of my first kiss.  Her name was Nancy and I will also never forget the kiss. 


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 9, 2008 04:19:36 PM Report
Cindy,
 Ahhhh... the thrill of that first boyfriend... and of course that first kiss... I was 13 and he was 17  he was a dream.. how this brings back memories... I love your wonderful poems.. hugs ~She  Whispers

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on June 9, 2008 02:53:38 PM Report
What a nice memory you write of here Cindy, I guess we all have those recollections of our first loves.  Henry
Comment By: FreeSteve on June 9, 2008 01:10:22 PM Report
Cin, this is a very sweet accounting of a special moment in your life....which makes it more enjoyable to read.  I remember kissing  a young lady I cared about very much, for the first time, I can't come up with words to describe how wonderful it was.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 9, 2008 11:14:41 AM Report
Oh the thrill of new emotions and first experiences! This was lovely, I especially enjoyed how you described the kiss itself (you peeker you!!) and how you touched your lips later in your room. The memories within this piece drip of sweet innocence, I have enjoyed this thoroughly. Very nicely done Cindy!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on June 9, 2008 10:48:28 AM Report
Nice reminisce. I was 13. Took a girl name, Terry to see the animated Disney

movie, "Lady and a Tramp". Big deal for me then. Ha

Got a kiss like you describe. We were sorta friends all the way through high school. We never went anywhere together after that except to Mass every Sunday just about.

I guess I should have married that girl. :o) 

Ahhh..memories.  Thanks for posting this Cindy. It'll make everybody think back.

Hugs,

Richard

 

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on June 9, 2008 10:29:38 AM Report
egads! my pc is playing up...I know I ws a very early starter but I was aged 11 not 1 as below LOL
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on June 9, 2008 10:28:26 AM Report
so sweet1 I too, remember my first kiss. It was aged 1 after a boy scout dance under a tree with a boy called "monkey" Ross. He suited his nickname. It was slobbery and unpleasant but he suggested we did it again..so we did. I went to bed a changed girl that night ;-)  Ali x




 


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