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Author Name: Premiumlionheart 12 Comments
Date Added: June 06, 2008 20:06:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Whipporwill
          Through the darkness
          The sound echoed back
          With the wind's melancholy chill,
          Close to the forest's edge,
          Fresh from an understanding rain
          Came nature's voice
          Of a secret love to fulfill.
          Silken folds of air
          Promised fruition of dreams
          With disciplines known only...
          To my lone whipporwill.
   
         
 
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Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on June 10, 2008 01:51:47 PM Report
Some things just make me smile. "Understanding rain" and "silken folds of air" and "whippoorwills" do it every time.  ML

 

 (Don't turn your back on len. He once threatened to come down here and shoot my whippoorwills.)

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 10, 2008 01:28:38 PM Report
Whporwills must be common to the south? I've never heard one, but they must have a pretty call for folks to write about them. Just lovely verse, Richard...len
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on June 8, 2008 04:41:28 PM Report
You write with such magic and grace Richard.

All your poetry is beautiful and pure perfection.

A more authentic soul I have not read.

~Cindy  xo                   

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 8, 2008 12:47:52 PM Report
Your so right  there is no sound as beautiful... but the evening doves capture my nature heart also
.beautiful poem...Sir Richard... Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeReborn on June 8, 2008 11:06:28 AM Report
wow, serious, deep writing i see here, Lionheart! keep writin'!!!

 

*~Reborn~*

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on June 7, 2008 11:29:46 PM Report
Fantastic write Ol'Dog!
Hugs,
Lil'One~

Comment By: FreeAngel on June 7, 2008 11:58:08 AM Report
A really lovely poem

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on June 7, 2008 11:42:53 AM Report
My goodness! Strange things do happen.. I have just posted a poem about a rain bird along the same lines as yours and I am on the other half of the world from you! Amazing! I love this write and I believe that birds are so much smarter. I wish you well.
Fantastic write my friend.

Sharon JJ
Comment By: FreeSteve on June 7, 2008 08:16:30 AM Report
Your poem creates a moment of calm reflection for the reader. The early morning singing of birds is a nice start to the day.
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 7, 2008 07:27:54 AM Report
Beautifully written loved this peaceful and serene read
Cathy

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on June 6, 2008 10:16:04 PM Report
At my mother's house, they have several cardinals that come to visit often. We used to sit out on the deck and listen to them sing. Thanks for the memory Richard. Terrific piece, Joe
Comment By: FreeGlata on June 6, 2008 09:09:36 PM Report
I love the call of these birds...Mama (my grandmother) once wrote a poem about the critters of spring and summer  and the noises that they al make, and one mention she  made was how the bird always seemed to be yelling out, \"Whip Poor Will!\" LOL

Hugs to ya...and  now I want t o sit on the porch and listen to the night noises...

:o)

Sunshine...





 


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