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Author Name: FreeLordofShadows 6 Comments
Date Added: June 05, 2008 21:06:50 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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She says True love doesnt exist
You tell me you do not believe in love that's true,
That it does not exist on this mortal coil.
That all love is temporary,
That you don't expect me to stay around too long.
 
Honey, you aparently have not been paying attention,
You haven't seen nothing yet my dear.
You've never dated one such as me before,
For once I love someone,
It never ceases in it's path.
 
You don't seem to understand
I don't give up something that I want
I'm not fickle
My heart does not blow away with the wind
My love is unconditional
You may not believe
You may say it does not exist
That is alright with me
For I'll still be there loving you
I'll show you that True love does exist.
 
 
"Love exists as long and as forever as you choose it to last"
Author's Notes:
About my girlfriend. She told me last night she doesnt believe in true love. That it doesnt exist. That all love is temporary. that she didnt expect me to love her or stay around that long. I told her thats alright to believe but I didnt agree. I'm not the type of person who is fickle with my love, I do not give it freely but once it is given I do not take it away.
 
Update: June 22, 08. About two weeks or so ago she broke up with me. Yep, the saying nice guys finish last, is true. I'm always going to be alone because i'm a nice guy. I've tried not acting so.......but its just me. I can't .......
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngelface on June 24, 2009 03:46:14 AM Report
I'm so sorry for your lost! A very beautiful write!

 

Infinity

Comment By: FreeLubaina on October 12, 2008 04:09:51 PM Report
 

I've read several of your poems and I'm truly impressed by your talent. It's not easy to write pieces that have that "matter of fact, yet sensitive" style.I'll check back soon.
Take care.
Lubs...

Comment By: FreeS on September 3, 2008 09:57:19 PM Report
i think when a girl says she doenst believe true love exists and she is in a relationship with you, that what she means is that true love doenst exist with you, you prob should have broken up with her there ( i would have) but anyway man I agree with everything you wrote, i think that this is a phenomenal poem and that you are an awesome writer.

shoaib

Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on August 23, 2008 04:00:24 PM Report
Lord of Shadows, successful attempt, sincere words to clarify your unconditional love, but I am inclined to agree with your X. Unconditional but not everlasting. Check out my "Lovejoy" to be posted soon to see what may lie ahead on your path to happiness. By the way, I mentioned you in  today's posted  "Awakened"   I'm glad  I have not  mistaken you. Concerning your ghost letter to Bush, rest assured there has been No mistake but a complex well thought out plan for the good of.... and that's why there is no admittance.  Seems like I heard that "make no mistake "speech before...have you?

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 8, 2008 01:38:05 AM Report
Everything is temporary.....as temprary as life itself. Your girlfriend seems to have no conception of what love can be...She'll learn, hopefully...len
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 6, 2008 07:42:02 AM Report
Sounds like she is a very lucky lady. Unfortunately alot of people believe as her. So when someone like you comes around it gives hope to those who need it. So this amazing poem will be the hope they could use. I loved reading this could feel your love flowing throught out. Good luck
Cathy





 


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