| Comment By: Glata on June 12, 2008 02:51:11 PM
Just loverly, Steve...as always! You have a beautiful way with words and a way of making things seem very real...
Hugs to ya!
| Comment By: Angel on June 5, 2008 02:33:23 PM
Wonderful Steve. My comp has been having probs sorry not been on
| Comment By: Adri on June 2, 2008 12:51:04 AM
This is good, good lines with solid emotion of observation.
Very very good, I like this a lot.
This is such a strong poem!
| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on June 1, 2008 09:50:55 PM
|You have just stepped into.....\"The Steve Zone.\" I really like this, brother.. The time between night and day...wakefulness and slumber, can harbor many unseen things... Love IT!...len|
| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on June 1, 2008 05:51:43 PM
"Ethereal spirits that live between light and dark"...loved this line, it is a knowing that something else is there in that brief window yet it cannot be defined. This line made me think about my situation...of how I feel caught in that space of neither here nor there. Fine penning Steve!
| Comment By: She Whispers on May 31, 2008 05:50:49 PM
|Transitions in life I think is constant ...sometimes the whispers is what you need to be listening to in life.. Your such a wonderful poet with ways to express what you feel.. A true gift of speaking words...|
~ Hugs ~ She Whispers
| Comment By: Moon Fairy on May 31, 2008 05:35:18 PM
This is a great write and belive you've described transition very well.
I know I have experienced, many have a hard time getting a grasp on it.
| Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on May 31, 2008 01:23:48 PM
Times of transition are always loaded with potential.