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Author Name: Moderatorlostmysanity 2 Comments
Date Added: May 21, 2008 22:05:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Grieving & Loss Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Last night
 Last night I fell asleep thinking of the one I love
Fell asleep holding a picture of the one I love
Holding it close to my heart
A tear trickled down my eye
Seeing the picture of you smiling
Seeing you so alive
I had a dream last night that you were still alive
We were having one of our long walks
One of our great talks
About what you wanted from me in life
How you truly wanted nothing from me except for me to be happy
Happy while I was with you things seemed to have gone away
Life just floated away while I spent my time with you
I looked into your eyes
I saw the pain you were in
Made me love you even more
Admire you even more
You were a fighter
And that I did get from you
Never give up
Always spread your wings
Never be afraid to fall
You will always get back up
Even if it takes you a moment
I learned that best from you
You had fallen so many times
But you got right back up
Told that bad luck to kiss your butt
And kept on walking not looking back
You taught me to learn from the mistakes
I woke up with a tear in my eye
Wondering why
Why were you taken from me?
When I needed you the most
You were the inspiration of my life
 
 
Author's Notes:
About my father.
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Comments:
Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on February 23, 2009 08:48:58 AM Report
scott, sentiments well expressed here, nice wriitng,. john
Comment By: FreeZoila on May 22, 2008 05:45:33 AM Report

.........*tear...*sniff..*sniff......this poem was so touching....everything you just wrote..is everything I wish I had written for my father in exactly these words....I RELATED SO MUCH...though I did have to smile at the line.."Told that bad luck to kiss your butt".....aww...haha...cute....anyways...I'm sure your father would be proud and happy............but really it still hurts so much to miss them.....*sighs.......loved this poem.........beautiful.....


-zlc






 


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