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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 11 Comments
Date Added: May 12, 2008 09:05:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Soul Mates

Summer night with a silky breeze

Our only light an August full moon

I watched as you walked to me

A hypnotic fragrance arrives

Your body pressed against mine

The first time I have ever held you

My emotions are finally released

I search for the right words to say

If you only love me for a moment

Just hold me close on this night

Think of nothing else for a second

Then this can be the last of life

Our love passed through eternity

It has been and will always survive

Two destined to be forever united

Travel intently on the wings of time

Author's Notes:

I believe that love can be eternal and we keep searching until we find our soul mate.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJanice Herzog on December 12, 2008 02:28:33 PM Report
Dear Steve:  What a passionate and steamy poem.  Beautifully done.  Love, Janjan xoxo
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 18, 2008 12:38:06 PM Report
Breathtaking for sure makes my heart just skip a beat loved every word Yes you are a romantic and a very good one as is a poet
......Cathy......

Comment By: FreeAdri on May 15, 2008 01:53:38 PM Report
I agree...  I believe we all have a soul mate, someone that is the other half of who we are. 
Great write. 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on May 13, 2008 02:23:06 PM Report
nahhh i don't think it is at all possible...can't be

ha ha NOT

absolutely, positively possible

if not then i'm ready to die, life would be so pointless

 

cin xo

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on May 12, 2008 11:45:55 PM Report
Steve,
Stunning verse--I really dont have alot to say, the comments below
are enough of what I am thinking..Well done, enjoyed!
~Tracie

Comment By: FreeGlata on May 12, 2008 10:17:09 PM Report
You've certainly touched a lot of people with this write, my friend!  You do know how to put your  feelings, thoughts and emotions right out there!

Well done, Steve...

Glata

Comment By: FreeAmy on May 12, 2008 01:34:51 PM Report
A wonderfully romantic read. I loved it.

~Amy

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on May 12, 2008 01:32:31 PM Report
I stand back from promises of forever, who can posslby forsee what can befall a couple and see them apart at some distanct time in the future? I think "forever" is in the moment (various lengths of time) when love is in full blom,  full and rich for as many days, weeks, years as it continues to bloom. Perhaps I am taking this out of context but this part of the poem seems to say what I am trying to express in my comment here. "If you only love me for a moment Just hold me close on this night Think of nothing else for a second Then this can be the last of life" Steve your poems of love have an awareness and vulnerability about them that draws the reader close...we can all relate to the message in your poetry. Very nice!

 

~Barbara~

 


Comment By: FreeLorraina on May 12, 2008 11:16:52 AM Report
O' Boy Steve you just get better at expressing such very dear emotions..I believe you are right love Can be eternal and it takes a soul mate to make that happen  lovely  Connie
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 12, 2008 11:14:41 AM Report
Amen, Brother STeve...I suspect, somehow, love is the engine for all creation. That just could be the poet in me, but it's a gut feeling.you don't need froof with a good gut feeling...Wonderful poem of amore. {that's German, I think}...len
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 12, 2008 09:58:59 AM Report
Steve,
 Oh my ... Goodness ...
 Your so right always looking for that soul mate.. Your write with such longing and I understand all to well...  This is lovely... It makes ones day there is so much love in this world...Thank you for your wonderful comments...Texas sends  Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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