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Author Name: Freela-la908 1 Comments
Date Added: May 12, 2008 04:05:02 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Persistent Heart

Like those lungful days I stared and dreamt of you

How I felt on the day when I proudly held your hand

Or the first kiss you gave me promising me the world

As we danced and laughed treading on the sun warmed sand


Like the first time you said my name for them to hear

How my heart raced with every delicate sound

And when you lead me away from their abuse

I thought you were my soul mate I had finally found


Like those little love notes passed secretly in class

I still have them hidden safely away

And when I see you smile and walk past me like you do

I feel a suffocating cloud shadow me for the rest of the day


Like when you asked me to be yours truly

I held my smile tightly for the longest time yet

Because you weren’t just any other girl

You were my first girlfriend that my heart will never forget


So like the fleeting beat of my heart

That I still get when I see your face once again

My love waits, neither renewed nor forgotten

But condemned by this heart replaced by pain


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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 12, 2008 09:31:48 AM Report

That I still get when I see your face once again

My love waits, neither renewed nor forgotten

But condemned by this heart replaced by pain....
 Your poetry is beautiful but so sad... Hugs ~ She Whispers


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