| Comment By: Glata on May 4, 2008 03:30:00 PM
It's always with perfect vision we see what we let go. Very well done! Lots of big words too, lol!
Glata, with a dictionary
| Comment By: Lorraina on April 30, 2008 04:24:49 PM
I don't agree this is a shallow man. It is more like a man with a very sensitive heart..No matter
who we are we look back and say 'if only' as in all cases it takes two hearts to love each other
If the time wasn't right then..You can still feel the nostalgia of that time, with no bad memories
. Wishful thinking is a bind we all have at some time so enjoy the reflection... Good to share this with you the wording is perfect...Lorraina
| Comment By: SilkinTears on April 29, 2008 12:27:26 PM
Some lessons are harder learned than others, but not learning the lessons is worse than recognizing where growth is needed. Loved this write Steve.
| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on April 28, 2008 07:24:35 PM
Moments past move through my memory
Like shadows cast on a white picket fence
Flickering slowly in my subconscious thoughts
I LOVE that image, Steve..Nicely worded, buddy...len
| Comment By: Moon Fairy on April 28, 2008 07:15:43 PM
Is better to have loved in the way that you could at the time then never to have experienced
being with her at all~
Good write-reflecting is always a good way to learn from the past to flourish in the now.
| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on April 28, 2008 03:25:59 PM
I love this dignified reflection Steve. You neither mourn or rejoice, just reflect. Describing the mental images as being like shadows moving across a white picket fence was brilliant...I'm not sure it the "white picket fence" was indicative of the traditional "family" arrangement but my mind did go there. Fine penning, I really enjoy your work.
| Comment By: b doneff on April 28, 2008 08:14:16 AM
Ouch, and ....ouch again. Oh well, you know, we all have those what ifs hanging around, but all we can DO is try and think that there was a reason we didn't go there at that time, and believe we are better now for it. Anything else, and we could all be quite mad I would think..
| Comment By: Angel on April 28, 2008 02:53:38 AM
So sad ove comes in many forms and we all loose someone or something we loved if we look back on the past hun
| Comment By: She Whispers on April 27, 2008 11:27:03 PM
Love affects all so differently.. Shallow are some who just don't want or understand what is really going on.....what a waste for this man...
Hugs ~ She Whispers