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Author Name: Premiumlionheart 18 Comments
Date Added: April 27, 2008 12:04:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Learning to Fly
Go softly on the wind,
lift unlabored
as you can.
  
Glide across rippling grass;
no need to worry
about height or gain.
  
Change direction
 smooth and quick,
just as shorebirds turn.
 
Rustle tips of tallest trees
and dip between
their tangled vines.
 
Bound aloft to unclouded skies,
above bitter streams
of sanguine life.
 
Come down when ready
and not before
and let no one say...
 
You can't do that.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 12, 2008 03:14:49 PM Report
Such a wonderful and beautiful lesson on flying so free ability to take control love this
Cathy

Comment By: FreeSuzin on June 6, 2008 10:26:22 PM Report
This poem has such an important message.  No one should ever let anyone tell them that they are incapable of achieving something.  This poem really was inspiring, and filled with beautiful, imaginative images.

Comment By: FreeReborn on May 17, 2008 02:51:19 PM Report
ahhh, that makes beautiful pictures in my imagination!!! way to go!!!

 

*~Reborn~*

Comment By: FreeJose Noriega on May 10, 2008 10:25:06 PM Report
this is a nice poem i can picture it in my head...great write
Comment By: FreeZoila on May 8, 2008 12:13:30 AM Report

i loved all the visuals you provided.....but i loved even more the last four lines....i think the spacing right before the last line ....and then reading it really drives in those last words.....i love your style , and your words......so honest and pretty.................*waits to read more.................................


hugs,


-zlc


Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on May 4, 2008 06:04:03 AM Report
I really love this one--So very uplifting
Enjoyed Ol'Dog,
~Lil'One

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on May 3, 2008 12:01:22 PM Report
I'm with Len on this one Richard. This is very calming as well. Nicely done, Joe
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on May 2, 2008 11:31:27 AM Report
There's a ride at Disneyland where you feel you are flying over the world and this poetry is excatly what you feel like.  Enjoyed the ride.
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 1, 2008 05:13:28 PM Report
My favorite dreams are flying dreams, Richard..Only, in every one of them, I'm in constant damger of losing control and crashing...What do ya think, doc?.....LOved the feeling in this one, buddy...len
Comment By: FreeLorraina on May 1, 2008 10:44:22 AM Report
The peace an splender of this poem is really beautiful   the utter freedom reaches out and gives

hope    Lorraina

Comment By: FreeSteve on May 1, 2008 09:09:10 AM Report

Self actualization, against common opinion gives life meaning....to soar and be free.  Excellent.


Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on April 29, 2008 04:55:17 PM Report
Now this is what we all need to hear. To fly, to let

go and feel free in our own time. To land when we feel the need.

Many lessons within this poem dear. I would love ot fly ore the

lands and land in a secluded spot where no human resides, to

just take in the silence and absorb all beauty around, then take flight

lazily back to home to tell the tales of my journey. Let them tell me

I can't!! I am one to show them different!

Great and peaceful flight here.

Hugs,

XO

Penny

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on April 29, 2008 12:08:45 PM Report
I'm one of those who if you tell me "you can't" I will do it just to prove you wrong. hehe Yes we all can fly but we have to want to.

Helen

Comment By: FreeAngel on April 28, 2008 11:47:10 AM Report
My dad use to say its a challenge nothing is difficult a phrase i have adhered to throughout my life. You can do that. Never say cant.

 

Fabulous

Comment By: FreeGlata on April 27, 2008 10:34:50 PM Report
Soaring when you're told you  can't...Proving the world wrong...That's what it's all about!

Hugs...and fly, hon...fly like a wonderful, free eagle!

Sunshine :o)

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 27, 2008 02:52:53 PM Report
Richard,
 We all have to learn how to fly ... both  weak wings at a time.. We have to step off  and try our wings just like a baby bird that has fallen from the nest...
Wonderful poem...
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on April 27, 2008 02:43:45 PM Report
Hoo-boy! What a trip! Thanks, lionheart. ML
Comment By: FreeAmber P on April 27, 2008 01:30:08 PM Report
This is pretty.  That's all I know to say.
-Claude.





 


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