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Author Name: FreeSilkintears 12 Comments
Date Added: October 24, 2009 23:10:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A single tear fell
A single tear fell
as a child cried
silently from the distance
his mother stood by his bedside

A single tear fell
as he drifted far away
angels lifting him high
leaving his pain of yesterday

A single tear fell
and a mother cried
falling to her knees
as a part of her died

A single tear fell
for the joy that will never be
no future or tomorrow
as a little boy is set free

A single tear fell
sadness and joy are one
a baby boy in restful peace
lives with angels now in heaven


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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on April 27, 2010 10:25:27 PM Report
plenty of tears here.

but not over there.

bittersweet poem my dear

Comment By: FreeJennifer on February 14, 2010 11:35:56 PM Report
mmmmmmmm the life of a child.... Such sadness written beautifull. Prayers and hugs.... Jen
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on November 24, 2009 11:57:00 AM Report
Dear Helen....I could not bear a child being taken away, and I feel the sadness within these lines of your precious work...Such sadness fades away for the young boy's Soul to be at peace...I liked the repetition of the single tear throughout the work, bringing us the message of the write...

In heartbreak.....Margaret....

Comment By: FreeAndrew on November 13, 2009 10:38:04 PM Report
absolutely heartbreaking - something that every parent dreads - still, this is a touching tribute that captures that pain no one should endure
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on November 13, 2009 10:24:58 PM Report
There is NOTHING sadder than the death of an infant. LIfe is not fair. Everyone should have the opportunity to make  mistakes and have a chance for love.. Yer box is full, so here's my response to "{Regrets"....

 

Thank you so much, Helen...The lady's name was Sherice.. She was an ex-fashion model, and I was still a practicing drunk..She might have been the right one, but at the wrong time...Just a meloncholy stroll down Memory Lane....len 

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on November 9, 2009 08:19:42 PM Report
Such sadness in this.  As a parent I don't know how I would be through all in your poem. 
Comment By: FreeEvelyn Wilson on November 2, 2009 10:50:14 PM Report
So beautifully sad.
Comment By: FreeLORETTA PITILLI on November 2, 2009 08:48:12 PM Report
my heart grieves for the mother whose heart is torn knowing that the end of her little boys life will set him free. Such sadness and pain. an emotional write done so well loretta
Comment By: FreeAngel Wings on October 27, 2009 12:10:59 PM Report

So, very emotional ..Tears came to my eyes as i read it. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


Angel Wings


Comment By: FreeSteve on October 26, 2009 12:40:16 AM Report
The depth of emotion in this write is very moving.
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 25, 2009 07:42:38 PM Report
To me the single tear meant the boy felt parting was bittersweet...but not unfavorable. This poem is like that parting...sad, yet comforting too. Very nice Helen!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: Freee. Gene Myers on October 25, 2009 07:13:52 AM Report
  I like the line    .."a little boy is set free"    It has a feeling of giving new life to a sad situation.  Though in reality aren't we all trying to return to heaven?  Isn't that a goal in life?   He has made it.   We should be glad for him.    Gene





 


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