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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 6 Comments
Date Added: April 18, 2008 12:04:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Crying Desert



Rugged colossal cliffs were stretching
into pastel hues with evening
native rapture paint brush

Sullen crys was testing the west torch
of heat itís blazing massive head wind
 with burning breath rush

Silence reined this desert dry world
native plants who thrived with just
a few stingy drops
of saving rain

In shallow moist creek beds cotton woods
leaves rattled within dust devil breeze
with quick speed it had
suddenly gained

 

Gathering cathedral clouds invade
 the sunís  face performing clouded shadows
across vast desert floor

 

Evening promises cool taste of falling rain
to a crying desert begging for
just a little bit more

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on June 12, 2008 07:35:22 PM Report
I just love how descriptive your writing is India. This one is no exception dear.

~Cindy

Comment By: FreeCathy on June 7, 2008 07:59:57 AM Report
I again just love your beautiful words you use in your amazing poems. Here is no exception, Breathtaking!!!
Cathy

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on April 22, 2008 08:18:13 PM Report
We don't need much here in the desert.  Your images paint an unforgiving picture of what desert living is really all about.

 

 

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on April 20, 2008 09:25:36 PM Report
Oh. this brings back memories so real.

I love this my dear.

Hugs,

Richard

Comment By: FreeAminath Agleema on April 20, 2008 07:36:38 AM Report
wonderful write
Comment By: FreeAngel on April 18, 2008 02:05:42 PM Report
A most excellent write my friend

 

Love Angelxx





 


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