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Author Name: FreeSilkintears 13 Comments
Date Added: April 14, 2008 12:04:37 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Winds of tomorrow
I'm all alone now entangled in this spider web.
Clouds messing with my thoughts
not allowing any closure.
The negative weights are heavy
and the future sees no sun,
Cloudy days of yesterdays storms
have meshed together as one.

You are a dream not to be dreamed
only an illusion of mystery.
I am a dreamer of tomorrow
trying to rewrite history.

So now the time slowly drifts
into the winds of tomorrows hands.
The future is controlled by time
whatever it commands.


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Comment By: FreeCathy on June 18, 2008 05:51:00 PM Report
Better times are ahead I loved this poem though sadness filled my heart reading it your words once again touched my hear. loved it
........Cathy.....


Comment By: FreeS on April 23, 2008 02:15:29 PM Report
awesome poem

Comment By: FreeLorraina on April 23, 2008 01:42:48 PM Report

I to have had this despair. But believe me there is more hope in this poem than despair. Admitting  'in dreams not to be dreamed'  you are awakening from this aweful state.  hope is there on your horizon..Be strong be proud find someone worthy of you Hugs Lorraina


Comment By: FreeAngel on April 18, 2008 11:21:55 AM Report
Hope the windy storms pass for you Helen. Good times will come again and the winds will ease to a breeze.

 

Beautiful

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on April 17, 2008 09:42:02 PM Report
Storm clouds may gather, but eventually they will pass by Helen. I hope your storms pass quickly and the sun shines upon you.   Henry
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on April 16, 2008 01:57:21 PM Report
Dear Helen-
I Loved This!!!!!
Forgotten lessens of yesterday

Remold this world of mud and clay

Until times control loses power

And life is not measured by the hour---
It seems that this world and its destination have
slowly been leading us Back to the Beginning~
What a Shame~
Hope all is well for You and yours My Friend~
Peace~
James

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on April 15, 2008 10:47:30 PM Report
Oh the damnation of time!

Powerful write .   

 

Hugs,

Richard

Comment By: FreeSteve on April 15, 2008 12:12:17 AM Report
This is an excellent write that expresses powerful emotions
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 14, 2008 09:23:55 PM Report
Helen,
 We just have to listen to what waits for us...)I enjoyed this..
 ~ She Whispers(So now the time slowly drifts
into the winds of tomorrows hands.
The future is controlled by time
whatever it commands.

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on April 14, 2008 01:15:01 PM Report
I understand these thoughts. Winds will come and winds will go
What is our future.........The wind will show.

Wonderful write.

Yours ...Fletch

Comment By: FreeGlata on April 14, 2008 01:06:39 PM Report
I hope that the winds die down...and that you can find peace in the situations around you. I'm here for ya, and I love you, my friend.

As Barbara says...the clouds cannot last forever...

Hugs...Glata

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 14, 2008 12:40:37 PM Report
Despair is felt throughout this piece but not only that. I also feel acceptance and a sense of giving it up to something beyond yourself.

 

*hugz to you* The sun will come out one day soon-- the clouds cannot last forever.

 

~Barbara~ *understanding and feeling this*

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on April 14, 2008 12:39:08 PM Report
Very nicely done Helen! Joe




 


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