| Comment By: Cathy on June 18, 2008 05:51:00 PM
|Better times are ahead I loved this poem though sadness filled my heart reading it your words once again touched my hear. loved it |
| Comment By: S on April 23, 2008 02:15:29 PM
| Comment By: Lorraina on April 23, 2008 01:42:48 PM
I to have had this despair. But believe me there is more hope in this poem than despair. Admitting 'in dreams not to be dreamed' you are awakening from this aweful state. hope is there on your horizon..Be strong be proud find someone worthy of you Hugs Lorraina
| Comment By: Angel on April 18, 2008 11:21:55 AM
Hope the windy storms pass for you Helen. Good times will come again and the winds will ease to a breeze.
| Comment By: Henry M. on April 17, 2008 09:42:02 PM
|Storm clouds may gather, but eventually they will pass by Helen. I hope your storms pass quickly and the sun shines upon you. Henry|
| Comment By: James Lagoski on April 16, 2008 01:57:21 PM
I Loved This!!!!!
Forgotten lessens of yesterday
Remold this world of mud and clay
Until times control loses power
And life is not measured by the hour---
It seems that this world and its destination have
slowly been leading us Back to the Beginning~
What a Shame~
Hope all is well for You and yours My Friend~
| Comment By: lionheart on April 15, 2008 10:47:30 PM
Oh the damnation of time!
Powerful write .
| Comment By: Steve on April 15, 2008 12:12:17 AM
|This is an excellent write that expresses powerful emotions|
| Comment By: She Whispers on April 14, 2008 09:23:55 PM
We just have to listen to what waits for us...)I enjoyed this..
~ She Whispers(So now the time slowly drifts
into the winds of tomorrows hands.
The future is controlled by time
whatever it commands.
| Comment By: FLETCHER on April 14, 2008 01:15:01 PM
I understand these thoughts. Winds will come and winds will go
What is our future.........The wind will show.
| Comment By: Glata on April 14, 2008 01:06:39 PM
I hope that the winds die down...and that you can find peace in the situations around you. I'm here for ya, and I love you, my friend.
As Barbara says...the clouds cannot last forever...
| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on April 14, 2008 12:40:37 PM
Despair is felt throughout this piece but not only that. I also feel acceptance and a sense of giving it up to something beyond yourself.
*hugz to you* The sun will come out one day soon-- the clouds cannot last forever.
~Barbara~ *understanding and feeling this*
| Comment By: Joe McNinney on April 14, 2008 12:39:08 PM
|Very nicely done Helen! Joe|