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Author Name: FreeBlueyd553 10 Comments
Date Added: April 01, 2008 10:04:08 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Butttercup

Buttercup

 

When sleep escapes me
Where sentinel guards a gate without entrance
I wander into elusive dreams of fairy tale
Never pluck wild flowers sown in arcane desire
Turn your face away from the winter sun
And believe in the warmth of spring
Did I glimpse the shadow of his face?
Feel his kiss upon my ivory neck?
 
Lift a buttercup up under your chin
It always shines gold
When you are in love
It always shines gold!

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Comment By: Freejag on July 7, 2008 04:33:27 PM Report
Wow great write excellent use of repetition and I love the way that the last for lines are almost like a refrain to or an after thought to the main verse but without it it would not be as good. Brilliant work

Comment By: FreeCathy on July 5, 2008 07:57:54 PM Report

Lift a buttercup up under your chin
It always shines gold
When you are in love
It always shines gold!

What a beautiful way to end such a beautiful poem your words just touched my heart I loved reading every word of it excellent in every way
......Cathy

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on April 22, 2008 09:00:02 PM Report

This brings a smile.  Maybe we just need to make love as simple as a buttercup under our chin.  Maybe love is that simple. 


Comment By: FreeSamuel E. Stone on April 22, 2008 06:16:30 PM Report
Cute little write... enjoyed the read...

Wishing you well...

Sam

Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on April 3, 2008 05:51:24 PM Report
It is my belief that love is a great healer, and can open up another's heart even if it is guarded and has no gates! Wonderful poem Cindy!   Henry
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on April 2, 2008 02:00:56 PM Report
Beautifully written.
Yours ....Fletch

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 1, 2008 09:39:40 PM Report
Lift a buttercup up under your chin
It always shines gold
When you are in love
It always shines gold!>>>very beautiful poem I have missed your lovely poems.. thanks for your comments on my humble poems..
Hugs  She Whispers


Comment By: Freeb doneff on April 1, 2008 08:07:04 PM Report
Beautilfully done Cindy. Makes it hard to wait til all the flowers come alive! I had heard something similar to this only with a dandelion..(I prefer the buttercups, lol! )
Nice to see you here..
b
Comment By: PremiumDavid Turner on April 1, 2008 03:32:27 PM Report
"Sometimes for me the meanest flower that blows

Doth give rise to thoughts that lie too deep for tears"

 

Don't step on the daisies or you will destroy somebody's wish!

 

David

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on April 1, 2008 11:36:38 AM Report
This is a beautiful poem for Springtime.

It sure suits my vision of a love poem for the season.

 

Hugs,

Richard





 


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