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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 10 Comments
Date Added: March 19, 2008 05:03:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Love You So

Swells of wind moved across the open field as a random caress

Tilted rays of light from the setting sun silhouetted you softly

I could feel your presence as you silently approach the door

Your hair cascaded down like golden wheat in a gentle gust

Tender silence separated us as we took measure of each other

My hand caringly touched your face as you moved closer to me

Twilight drifted through the window and lent a crimson glow

Closed off to everything else I held you like a delicate wild flower

A subtle fragrance made me a willing captive to our embrace

Free of all other sensations our love became a romantic rapture

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Comment By: FreeJanice Herzog on January 30, 2009 04:35:02 PM Report
Dear Steve:  Romantic, and passion filled also.  Nicely written.  Love, Janjan xoxo
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 19, 2008 10:53:11 PM Report
The delicate wording drew me in! This reads like a scene from a romance novel. =))



Comment By: FreeAminath Agleema on March 20, 2008 10:35:09 AM Report
wow so lovely
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 19, 2008 05:39:20 PM Report
 Very beautiful poem  as always.... Your heart on every line... Your such a romantic..
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on March 19, 2008 02:48:55 PM Report
An instant favorite Steve- love the softness and feeling of your lines..

Comment By: Freeb doneff on March 19, 2008 02:13:06 PM Report
Well Steve, its nice to finally be able to read some of your work! I think it has a very tender touch, and you use words and phrases that speak to many. Oh to heck with all that, I liked it! lol..(never was a critic!) It was just gentle, like a love poem should be..

Comment By: FreeAmber P on March 19, 2008 01:03:42 PM Report
I agree with the comments below me.  It's very romantic.  I also like the alliteration in the second line.  Good job.

Comment By: FreeLorraina on March 19, 2008 11:51:18 AM Report
Beautiful  and they say men aren't romantic!  Connie
Comment By: FreeGlata on March 19, 2008 07:28:39 AM Report
A beautiful job,  Steve, showcasing your romantic heart VERY well here.

Sweet and romantic...Very lovely!



Comment By: FreeGee on March 19, 2008 06:56:23 AM Report
I will be always in the cloud 9 if I have someone like you in my life.....
This is real romantic...

I love this....


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