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Author Name: Freela-la908 6 Comments
Date Added: March 18, 2008 22:03:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Daddy And Me
 
 

I remember my feet and the luscious grass

From above, the sun fueled my smile

His laughter and mine echoed together

Making our trip to the park worthwhile

 

I remember his face with little lines

But the graying streaks showed age in his hair

My little hand held safely in his

How I'd give anything to once again be there

 

We lay down beside one another

Cushioned by the rolling slope of the hill

My innocent eyes staring past the branches

Where angel choir and paradise is real

 

"Daddy" I whispered,

"When will you join the angels up there?"

Watching his eyes water I squeezed his hand

"...soon, but I'll always be near"

 

I got back up to my feet, skipping

And beneath the heavens I twirled

He watched me with happiness

"Daddy, you're the best dad in the world"
 
 
Author's Notes:
Iunno..Haven't seen my Dad in a while..previously he's had tests for cancer..but iunno..he smokes heavily..I don't want to loose him..I wish I could take it all back..we used to go exploring in the parks.
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on October 1, 2008 05:58:00 PM Report
This is a super write, well-balanced, so meaningful. Lots of love here, Mahalarose, the best love Dads hope for...whatever may happen. I would often take both my girls fly-fishing and watch their smiles, also.



Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 19, 2008 07:14:48 PM Report
The love between a daughter and her Dad...I was very close to my dad... I know how you feel... I do hope you see him soon..
Hugs and LOve ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on March 19, 2008 05:05:59 PM Report
a very beautiful and touching write,Mahalarose
in my prayers,may all be well.

                  Micky


Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 19, 2008 09:31:09 AM Report
Mahalarose:  this is such a lovely loving write.  I am so sorry you are not in contact with your Dad as this write is so precious.  

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeSteve on March 19, 2008 08:37:43 AM Report
There is no greater love than parent and child........a gift from god......your poems a mature beyond your years.....very well done.....prayers to you!
Comment By: FreeKeri on March 19, 2008 04:56:38 AM Report
This is an excellent write - so very powerful.  You express yourself so well in this piece, and paint such a vivid picture.  Losing a loved one, especially a parent, is a daunting thing to face, and you portray that well.  I pray that all is well during this time -

~Keri





 


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