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Author Name: FreeBarbara D. 14 Comments
Date Added: March 14, 2008 16:03:23 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Smell a Rat
I have mice in the house
Yet not one I fear
Catnip is the stimulus
That causes chaos here
His eyes are black and beady
Round ears, enormous and pink
An influence without a squeak
He's lost his voice, I think
 
The yellow one is Sisal
Rope wraps his tiny form
Chewed ears and crooked whiskers
Have now become the norm
Small eyes full of innocence
Tail twisted in a knot
His pointed nose is kissable
Whoever would have thought
 
Polyester is rotund
With bristled fuzzy bod
The absence of appendages
Makes him appear quite odd
The misfit lacks expression
No whiskers, mouth or eyes
Only a bulbous pom-pom nose
That's thrice the normal size
 
Egg Roll's body is misshapen
But soft, like cozy slippers
His red felt ears, impressive
Have never heard a whisper
With silver bell on satin tail
A black yarn mouth, so tiny
He outshines his mousy pals
With feathers on his heiney
 
Rodents now surround me
Day to day they're scattered
Underfoot and strewn about
Bitten, clawed, and tattered
I know their kind is harmless
But I think I smell a rat
For I didn't have a single mouse
Until I got the cat
 
 
Author's Notes:
~BALDERDASH~        *squeak squeak*
 
 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreePeter Sammylin on November 10, 2009 08:03:30 PM Report
Hey Barbara,

Thank you for the many chuckles i had while reading this delightful funny work!  My brother and his wife had bought them selfs some tame rats who lived in a big cage in their living-room.  But finally these three guy's ended up living with us.  Mars, Twix and Skittles they were called.... 

Greetings: a still chuckling Peter
 
Comment By: FreeSteve on May 19, 2008 11:15:27 AM Report
What does a rat smell like because I may have smelled one too......your humor is subtle and sneaks up as a giggle.  :-)
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on May 19, 2008 02:19:58 AM Report
hehehe very clever Barbara 

Ali x

Comment By: FreeHenry M. on March 25, 2008 12:30:22 PM Report
Very cute words Barbara, it brought a smile to my face and a chuckle too!

Henry

Comment By: FreeFilthy on March 21, 2008 03:59:11 PM Report
We have a cat also, when the front door opens in the morning, one is confronted by an abattoir!

Funny stuff here B.

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on March 18, 2008 11:09:23 AM Report
Oh this is so cute and funny. I loved it. Very clever write Barbara.
Helen

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 17, 2008 09:41:35 PM Report
I live and die by balderdash, Barb..Very clever ryming, kid...len
Comment By: Premiumlionheart on March 17, 2008 08:54:45 PM Report
The best example of "squeak speak" I've heard in a long time. :o))

 

Hugs,
Richard

Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on March 17, 2008 03:45:23 PM Report

There's nothing wrong with the occasional foray into the world of balderdash, and as such things go this is a delightful example of the genre. I particularly liked some of the ingenious rhyming, such as the use of "bod" and "hinny". (Although I think the latter should be "heiney", unless the "black yarn mouth" is tinny, lol)

This brought a smile to my face. Nice work, Barbara.


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 15, 2008 08:43:00 AM Report
Barb,
You always come up with cute little poems this is a classic my friend..hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on March 15, 2008 06:25:47 AM Report
I just love animal humour and this onme is no exception wonderfully done Barbara.
Comment By: FreeGlata on March 14, 2008 08:47:08 PM Report
Brought a giggle to my heart and a smile to my face!

Cute work!!

Hugs and squeeks!

Glata

Comment By: FreeCeeCee on March 14, 2008 06:42:33 PM Report
Very fun, Barbara!

 

Cari

 

Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on March 14, 2008 06:20:18 PM Report
LOL! I like this a lot Barbara, very cute! Joe




 


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