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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 6 Comments
Date Added: March 04, 2008 10:03:03 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The River Cries
We have a legend about our small country river
 
Some say what ever you wish for it will deliver
 
There is a large rock right where the river bends
 
The place two young lovers met their tragic ends
 
Forbidden to love each other from the very start
 
They went to this spot and pledged their heart
 
Then standing on that rock they both jumped and died
 
People say the river swelled from the tears they cried
 
Old folks say visit the rock just at the midnight hour
 
Whisper your wish on the rock and drop a wild flower
 
It will carry your wish slowly to where the lovers went
 
If you are true of heart what you want will soon be sent
 

Because the lovers went there and got their eternal wish

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 1, 2009 10:13:20 PM Report
Awwww... *sniffle*.....this is such a sad legend Steve. It seems the more lovers are forced apart the more they want to be together. You have a marvelous imagination. I've enjoyed this!

 

~Barbara~ 

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 5, 2008 09:12:26 AM Report
Steve
As always you give us such great poems with love, sadness and wisdom...
Thank you for this one as well..I really enjoy your poetry my friend...
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on March 5, 2008 12:13:08 AM Report
Beautiful and I like the story behind the write, loved the flow.
Tragic romances are always a classic read, because they grab your attention from the
get-go..just like this.
Thank you sharing! Happy week to you..
Tracie~

Comment By: FreeAminath Agleema on March 4, 2008 01:19:23 PM Report

enjoyable poem......... I wish I can go to that river and wish :-)


Comment By: FreeDeAnna on March 4, 2008 11:13:12 AM Report
Tragicly sad, but very well written,   DeAnna
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on March 4, 2008 10:59:59 AM Report
Steve:  very nice addition for the Topic of the Week.

 

Lady D





 


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