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Author Name: FreeFireHam 9 Comments
Date Added: February 11, 2008 02:02:31 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Candle’s Desire

Candle’s Desire

 

Darkness surrounds as the cold sinks in.

Seems the bitter cold is destined to win.

The candle wet with wax, requires a spark.

And when it comes, it will dispel the dark.

 

Then no matter how hard the wind may blow,

The flame will increase, continuing to grow.

And as the flame proceeds to build heat,

Aroma of sandalwood is heady and sweet.

 

Now the candle has touched the scarlet flame.

It will be devoured and will never be the same.

It was for this purpose, the candle was formed.

Destiny fulfilled and the world is now warmed.

 

Harold McLelland

02/11/08

Author's Notes:

A lonly candle was lit and the rest is history.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on July 19, 2008 11:21:25 AM Report
Another amazing write fireman Sam (Ham)

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeCathy on June 22, 2008 09:23:04 AM Report
Well this is absolutely amazing you words so precious as is this poem loved every beautiful word of it
.......Cathy

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on February 19, 2008 07:13:52 PM Report
Bit of a sticky wick, eh, old boy?...len
Comment By: FreeGlata on February 15, 2008 04:06:40 PM Report
Very wonderful work, Ham...Love is the warmth of the world.

Hugs...

Glata

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on February 11, 2008 09:40:54 PM Report
You are amazing and so is this write! What more can I say?

I truly enjoyed this!

Hugs,

~Penny~

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on February 11, 2008 01:55:47 PM Report
Hey Mr Romance, watch out for those sparks eh...they get the burn started. Lovely write Harold...warm is GOOD.

 

~Barbara~ *being vague and teasing the heck out of you*

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on February 11, 2008 10:25:25 AM Report
Ham:  beautifully written and has several interesting ways to be analyzed!!!

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 11, 2008 08:30:03 AM Report
Ham,
 There is nothing as pretty as candles glows
in the darkness of a long night
with its warm flame

Candles of every color and perfume as the
soft breeze whispers their name
 You inspired me...

 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeSteve on February 11, 2008 08:23:57 AM Report
Harold, very nice poem.




 


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