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Author Name: Freela-la908 3 Comments
Date Added: January 24, 2008 03:01:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Am Double

What is inside me is double

And at the same time fake.

This life has been a waste

For my heart has made a mistake.

 

I look up into the distant sky where

Setting clouds of crimson are spread.

Everything has love's warm embrace

Except my heart which is now dead.

 

I know my ideas are still young

But it's one full of early pain.

I don't even in this mind

The other half has claimed my brain.

 

I feel like splitting in half

So that I'll have a chance at love.

I will have a new heart

For this dead one will go to the above.

 

I know I may not make sense

But inside I have it all worked out.

I've made so many mistakes

That I know what this life is about.

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Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on January 24, 2008 03:53:18 PM Report
Full of question and anxiety. When I was 15 I had not got a clue what to do with my life....It is all part of life to question. Just keep writing ;-)

It will all work out

 

Ali x

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 24, 2008 09:54:58 AM Report

I know I may not make sense


But inside I have it all worked out.


I've made so many mistakes


That I know what this life is about..... We all make mistakes.. but time will heal most of them...
Hugs ~ She Whispers


Comment By: FreeGlata on January 24, 2008 07:18:21 AM Report
Indeed, Mahala...Life is about mistakes and learning. Imagine, sweetie, how utterly boring life would be if everything were perfect and we had nothing more to learn from it?  The lessons, I've learned over the years, can be harsh...and  at times even devastating, but learning  from those times  will make you wiser and stronger and able to help others that will come along behind you that will be facing similar circumstances....

Hugs and hang in there, sweetie. You're an amazingly bright and caring girl. Just look at life as one big experiment...and learn what you can from it, then take those lessons and help everyone you can :o)

Glata





 


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