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Author Name: FreeLaPoeta 7 Comments
Date Added: January 16, 2008 10:01:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Stars Above

When you joined we knew you would go

Itís been over a month and I miss you so

We promised our love and held on very tight

You said donít cry weíll be together each night

Just look to the sky at our star thatís so bright

Before you sleep, think of me and gaze up above

Say a small prayer and send me all of your love

Where ever I am I will whisper your name

Iíll think of our love and send you the same

The heavens will surely keep our love together

While I am gone and when I return forever

Author's Notes:
Two young lovers separated by militray service
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on March 25, 2009 05:29:50 PM Report
A touching and insightful look at personal sacrifice.

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on November 19, 2008 10:08:07 PM Report
Steve,
Bittersweet write. The sadness of a separation when one is in the service- takes alot of
commitment on both sides.
Good write.
~Tracie 

Comment By: FreeAngel on September 6, 2008 03:37:41 PM Report
So sad when lovers have to be separated love. Great write
Comment By: FreeHerman Salazar, Jr. on January 16, 2008 12:27:53 PM Report
So nicely written.  It all flowed so well and expresses the true feeling of love.

Great work,

Herman

Comment By: FreeAminath Agleema on January 16, 2008 12:09:35 PM Report

nice poem....... very romantic


Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on January 16, 2008 11:05:00 AM Report
Steve,
Love stories always make me cry  as I watch the loyal tenderness and the embrace of each other kisses so intence it brings tears to my eyes ... Lovely poem... How you touch my heart with this poetry love letter in the whispers of love...
 ~ She Whispers

Comment By: Premiumjohn j. carey on January 16, 2008 10:42:23 AM Report
nicely written with sweet sentiments,john




 


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