| Comment By: Desiree on January 23, 2008 04:03:57 PM
|Very expressive. I like it. Great write. |
| Comment By: SilkinTears on January 17, 2008 01:25:56 PM
Hiding behind the shadow of denial surely can be fatal. Sooner or later we all have to face our demons...best to do it sooner than later.
| Comment By: Glata on January 16, 2008 07:29:20 AM
When the pain inside is more than the heart and soul can stand, there has to be an outlet or a catharsis of some sort. Many take the "needle" or "pill" or "alcohol" escape, as it's all that can work to ease the pain. Denial is what we all do because if it's not a reality, we don't have to deal with it.
Great write, Fletch...
| Comment By: Shelby on January 14, 2008 07:22:06 PM
|my smile is fake|
deep downs whats real
look me in the eye
to know how i feel
but you must make a promise
one that you must keep
for my happiness and joy
is only skin deep
is a painful cost
because behind my smile
all emotion is lost
I loved this poem
It expresses this feeling all too well
| Comment By: She Whispers on January 14, 2008 08:39:24 AM
Yes, .....Denial rapes us over and over....and does fatal things to our mind... This poem hurts my heart for you
to to be in this much pain...this hell
Texas sends Hugs and Love ~ She Whispers
| Comment By: john j. carey on January 14, 2008 05:32:44 AM
|great poem......john |
| Comment By: Mahala Rose on January 14, 2008 03:35:41 AM
Oh, I really don't know what to say as I know some of the feelings you have penned. This is very good but so sad. It's so easy to read and flows but it's made me think. Thankyou for sharing.