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Author Name: Freetonkatrucklvr 6 Comments
Date Added: January 13, 2008 19:01:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Devil with Blue Eyes
 I never saw it comming, for it came from behind,   A solid punch to the head face-first, - the wall I find,
 My conscience mind is reeling, with terror and dismay,
 Screaming, (Your gonna kill me), pummeling without delay,
  Crashing to the floor, in the dark I pray,
 Please God help me! Dont let me die this way..
 Heavy steel toe boots are kicken, deliberate to my ribs-
Spittle is flyin, sayin Im lyin,-   telling his family all fibs,
  I attempt to tell him, -it just wasnt me,
But the devil wont listen, wont acknowledge my plea,
  The moment my daughter saw him, kick me another blow,
She ran to the neighbors, her brother in tow,
  Im all in a ball, trying to protect my skull,
Im void of all emotions, my actions are null.
   As I saw myself, slowly slip away,
Something inside me snapped,-Hes gonna pay,
   Thrue pain and blood, my body does sway,
Fire keeps this bitch goin, keepin death at bay:
  His menacing laugh echos thrue my head, if I dont fight,
Ill surely end up dead,
    Those dead blue eyes, are upon me,
wondering what step Ill take, to get around this devil hound,
and make my last escape,
   I hear the sirens, my saving grace, the cops are at the door,
He tries to lie, but my savaged face, says a whole lot more....
   They took that blue eyed devil, screamin and cursin, led  handcuffed,
to their car, They read his rights, patted him down, berating him thus far,
 The kids never saw that, I am happy to say,
       We settled them down, not naer a sound, while quietly we pray.......
Author's Notes:
I wrote this poem years ago,shortly after it occured.Little did I know this person was on heroin and alcohol...I surely learned alot..How sad to find out the hard way...Ignorance is not bliss, ( personally)At least I know the signs....
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 6, 2008 05:12:16 PM Report
 We all have our hell all in different forms .. great poem.. I know many will relate to this abuse...
You survived  ...your alive!!I admire you ..
hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on March 3, 2008 01:25:54 AM Report
Painful Heartfelt Truth in words.

You Rock! I have over come some of the demons you have written about.

Truth is this piece could have been wrote About me. I hurt a lot of innocent people in my Madness. The Rehabs and Jails may have slowed me down a bit. But it took a complete physic change. Something Inside me changed! I found a way up and out of my own self delution. It took my Years and Years before I asked for help.

You are a gifted writer!
Yours .......Fletch

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on February 26, 2008 07:03:35 PM Report
I know of this kind of abuse all to well. I never saw

it coming either, but I did escape and I am alive,

thank God. This poem brought back alot of horror

for me but the best part about reading it was that it reminded me of the strangth and cinfidence that 

I gained from it all. I am sure alot of people will

relate to this one. Abuse is way to common in this

world but until the abuser truly gets what he

deserves it will continue. "An eye for an eye" I say! Great write though painful, but we must get it

out there and off our chest so to speak. I am

thankful you found that inner strength and are

here with us today.



Comment By: FreeSteve on February 25, 2008 05:55:29 PM Report
Wow! A very powerful poem......busting with emotions. Good Job.
Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on January 16, 2008 05:29:43 PM Report
Sorry that anyone would have to suffer such a terrifying attack,DeAnna
isn't funny how the mind shifts into overdrive at times like that telling us how to survive them
nicely done- Micky


Comment By: FreeAbrianne on January 15, 2008 07:29:33 PM Report
this poem is so well written!! good job!! I don't think it could have been said any better! congrats!   --Abrianne--


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