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Author Name: Freetonkatrucklvr 7 Comments
Date Added: January 08, 2008 01:01:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Broken Promises
You fill me with promises, you mean them at the time, then viciously you toss them ,no reason nor rhyme, I hear your pleas,  tears streaming down your face, bending on your knees, remorse of not, without a trace. 
     the love of others,and closest to you, bare the ragged scars you leave behind,- praying for hope,all pain undue, the master of despair, your love is unkind ...Callous, and cruel, with the games you play, wielding words of contempt, as a sword,you so slay.. anger and hatred so rule your heart, no room for another,lest ye impart.. Tears rain down as I let go, for I have given my all, love not, you bestow.. Such only pain doth befall........
                        you shall reap,what you have sown,
                         so make amends, try to atone,
                            or else you stand, and die alone....
                            
Author's Notes:
I wrote this poem because I couldnt express how I felt, so I wrote this poem to help me get past the hurt of a lost love.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGlata on March 7, 2008 11:47:03 AM Report
WOW! Powerful indeed! All I can say, DeAnna, is...he has no clue what a treasure he's lost. Foolish man...

Hugs to a brilliant woman, though!

(even if you do call yourself a Sharpei)  hehe

The ole bassett hound...Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 6, 2008 05:16:30 PM Report
Sometimes writing is the only one who listens.. as you may notice by so many poems my life is written on most of my poems... I enjoy your style of wisdom.We have to vent to survive
Hugs ~She Whispers

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on March 3, 2008 01:29:11 AM Report
I do the same thing, write when I don't know how to express myself!
Truth is you are gifted with a wonderful way of expression!

Once again YOU ROCK!
Fletch

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on February 16, 2008 01:55:35 AM Report

WOW!! You captured the emotions so well in this write. Such a sad write but there is a sense of releif there too. Losing love is one of lifes hardest task. But in the end it seems to make us stronger. More equipped for the new love if ever it comes around. It takes time to heal, but with time we do just that. Heartaches too, leave scars.


Awesome write!

~Penny~

Comment By: FreeSteve on February 13, 2008 01:43:06 PM Report
Love is hard to understand.....I think there is a painful side to it so appreciate the good part.......hopefully another day......another chance at love. Very expressive poem.
Comment By: FreeHenry M. on January 13, 2008 10:03:59 AM Report
Losing a love is never easy, especially if you are the one who is hurt. No words can fully express how you feel, all you can do is give your heart and mind the time to recover. Welcome to CP Deanna, you will like it here.  Henry

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on January 8, 2008 01:02:52 PM Report
This is a good start to healing a broken heart. Broken promises and lost dreams take time to get over. Good write full of heartache and pain and yet a promise for the future.
Helen





 


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