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Author Name: FreeFLETCH 7 Comments
Date Added: December 09, 2007 23:12:51 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Empty man
An empty man knows no fear
Yet the blackness haunts me
An empty man sheds no tears
Yet this pain still taunts me
Blackness is a living thing
Biting at my heals
It whispers out in anguish
Echoes how I feel
Upon this edge of darkess
Lies a place without a name
Blackness has just won the fight
I will never be the same
One day you won't be watching
One day I'll go too far
What is left of this empty man
Will be scattered amidst the stars
Then I'll know I'm free
As blackness shows it's face
Fading to the cryptic dark
In this empty mans embrace
 

 

Author's Notes:
This one seems so wicked dark. It is the oposite of the way I feel. I hope you have a wonderful day
 
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 10, 2007 07:10:14 PM Report
You have nailed depression in this poem Fletch. It sounds like somebody is about ready to jump off a tall building when nobody is watching. Suicide is a permanent solution to a fixable situation. (Just food for thought, like this poem.)

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeLast Temple Knight on December 10, 2007 04:12:24 PM Report
A little darkness makes the light that much more brighter...

Walk in the light, friend. ~ Joe

Comment By: FreeAngel on December 10, 2007 12:02:09 PM Report
This dark cloak clouds our mind and thoughts not wanting to think of things from the past that have caused us to feel this way.They come and go and when the sun shines and the clouds vanish for that time this is when the heart is so blessed

 

Magnificent Fletch

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 10, 2007 11:28:57 AM Report
 Darkess is a heavy coat to wear and we struggle to keep it on until it becomes so heavy we just crumble beneath its weight...  I know of this darkness ... Great poem my dear friend ~Thanks for your comments on my poems.. your a sweetheart...
Hugs and LOve ~ She Whispers


Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on December 10, 2007 06:21:43 AM Report
As always you create and write so that others can relate.

This does seem dark but you have expressed yourself

so well here. You put all the words in the exact place

that they need to be...You just have it that way...

Wonderful write, of that darkness that so many have

come to know.

Hugs,

~Penny~

Comment By: Freeb doneff on December 10, 2007 05:34:05 AM Report
Depression is an awful thing. I usually remind myself that if I'm feelin it, then all isn't lost. Numb is when it scares me...good write Fletch, and one I know  many will relate to.
b

Comment By: FreeAdri on December 10, 2007 04:18:40 AM Report
Very well stated.  To explain how you feel wile you are depressed is not always easy!  Done brilliantly. 
Adri x





 


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