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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 1 Comments
Date Added: December 01, 2007 00:12:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Fatal Remembrance
Fatal Remembrance

He paused for a moment and vanished from my sight
 he stopped whispering in my understanding ear
and said goodnight

 No more browsing glances he snatched
he dared not whisper for I would attack

Will his treachery deserve his early grave
to the hunters joy  will his heart be saved

Dusky red  will become  a stain on his chest
may his soul know no only vengeful rest

This traitor
I Must with my hateful words seize 
 We must cut out the lying tongue
it will be hard for him to breath
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 1, 2007 01:45:07 AM Report
What the heck is going on around here? Somebody is getting a tune up from the women on this site, who is it?


I feel so much unrest in the poems I've been reading here. Your message is strong India. I'm wondering if you shouldn't cut his fingers off too! *wink wink*




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