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Author Name: Freeramonathompson 0 Comments
Date Added: November 27, 2007 18:11:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Suicidal Eyes

A very dark parody of the Eric Carmen song Hungry Eyes

I've been meaning to tell you
I've got this depression that won't subside
I look in the mirror and I fantasize
My God, tonight
Now I can't get it out of my thoughts


I've got suicidal eyes
One look at my screwed up life and I can't diguise
I've got suicidal eyes
I feel the ever lengthing gap between you and I

I want to hurt you the way
You've hurt me
So I'm taking the only way out I know
Hoping that maybe you'll come to regret when you find out
My God, tonight
Now I just can't seem to get this idea out of my thoughts


Now I can't get it out of my thoughts
Oh baby now that you know about my suicidal eyes
Oh lover
Does it take you by surpise?
I need you to see
Oh darling this is the way
This is the way our love is supposed to end

2007 Ramona Thompson 

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