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Author Name: Freedogonthecomet 0 Comments
Date Added: November 24, 2007 03:11:39 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Walking in darkness I feel the souls cry,
Together we wander through life gone awry,
Misled and misleading social values apply,
The rebirth ignites Loves fire will dry,
Tears fall from sadness a current builds,
Connecting hemispheres it's unity yields,
Greater understanding forming new guilds,
Free like brisk winds blowing through fields,
Bring change upon Earth I can feel it inside,
Unknown things occur ignoring I've cried,
Not truly believing in myself I won't hide,
My written revelation helps me confide,
In life bound to nature is in God's hands,
Driving my purpose designed with plans,
Redemption, Salvation, painful demands,
Found in this life God's light expands,
Allowing my heart follows his commands,
While life falters by reason has purpose to show,
Unbelievers should be willing to accept and grow,
With what's been given from their highest low,
Forgiveness is there to believe you know.
Author's Notes:

I really don't know where this came from.  It just came out the day after the big tsunami struck in 2004.  It has been removed from another poetry site.  I have no idea why.

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