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Author Name: Freedogonthecomet 3 Comments
Date Added: November 17, 2007 21:11:40 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Revealing Dream

Observing from my table they devise a plan,
Silently in the background knowing they stand,
Masking true identity kept from the band,
Prevents their success hasn't room to expand,
As I study law taught by a new teacher,
Helps me expose every wicked feature,
In plots I'll evade while my preacher,
Removes masks over the inner creature,
Is easily captured by words my distinct,
Character is unwavering with heart-made instinct,
I follow paths laid by The Lord I'm linked,
To light when darkness thinks Love's extinct,
And belief of this union rekindles dreams lost,
Faith in miracles restored when Life tossed,
Overcomes fear of unknown becomes known,
To ordinary suffering in rememberance of his throne,
Strengthens my plight and I'll not postpone,
This peaceful expression which many don't condone,
What I grew up disliking I've somehow come to be,
The same reflection of a grim reality,
But believing in Jesus Christ will guide my destiny.

Herman Salazar, Jr.

Author's Notes:
I'm a firm believer of a spiritual battle thats taking place between forces of Darkness and powers of Light. I believe those who seek Jesus Christ as Savior are seen as prey by the forces of darkness. This poem too, was inspired by a dream that I had. Two in a dark suits and dark sunglasses observing me and taking notes but I always evaded their attacks. Thank you Jesus!
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Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on April 9, 2009 07:42:16 PM Report
Excellent Herman!
When Satan is knocking at the door, ask Jesus to answer.
God bless you, I am enjoying your writes so much.

Comment By: FreeAngelface on January 1, 2009 12:32:24 PM Report
I've been here to and know of this spiritual warfare within. I as well have had many a dreams too. Good write, keep sharing! God Bless you! And Happy New Year!


xx Angelface xx

Comment By: FreeDeAnna on January 16, 2008 02:19:56 PM Report
This is beautiful, very profound, I understood and enjoyed it immensely, Wonderful!












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