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Author Name: Freejohncarter 9 Comments
Date Added: November 17, 2007 13:11:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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She moves me
She moves me


She moves me in a way
Just like the constant sea
That ebbs and floes around my heart
For all eternity
She moves me like a shifting sand
I drift into her unseen hand
The place I long to safely land
I wait on her command
She moves me in the dark of night
And I dream of her
In restless thoughts, turning
Forever wanting yearning.





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Comment By: FreeHannah Mae on November 24, 2007 10:37:33 PM Report
~simply beautiful~ Very sweet write


Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on November 22, 2007 04:21:13 AM Report
Wonderful... Its a beautiful feeling to have



Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 22, 2007 01:17:07 AM Report
Sounds like she moves you ..By her reply I suppose its true....Only Love moves the heart..
~ She Whispers

Comment By: Freeb doneff on November 19, 2007 04:30:59 AM Report
NIce to be moved, isn't it? This was so gentle and seemed to be like a soft spoken touch. Well done  John, well done.

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on November 18, 2007 10:56:58 AM Report
Beautiful!!!!!!!!! "She moves me" is so touching.

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on November 18, 2007 08:13:45 AM Report
lovely dedication of love

Ali x

Comment By: FreeAdri on November 18, 2007 07:31:33 AM Report

Anybody who is not moved by your words, have no emotion and no heart. 
This moved me in ways of long forgotten emotions, of breathless heartbeats and beauty not visible to the eye.
I love this, more I then I can explain in words.
Adri xxx

PS: No gossip caused by jealous hearts, wishful admirers and dark souls can keep the truth and true movement of hearts at bay. 

Comment By: FreeMahala Rose on November 17, 2007 05:30:37 PM Report
So beautiful, your words warm my heart. very pretty.


Comment By: FreeGlata on November 17, 2007 01:20:17 PM Report
A beautiful ode, John, and it's sure to move her heart, too! You write love beautifully, my friend.

Many hugs



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