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Author Name: FreeAbby 9 Comments
Date Added: November 05, 2007 09:11:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Walking the Beach with the Poetess
 

The sands make impacts

I take former footprints

From the fishers’ waiting dugout.

 

The waves make impressions, footprints

Drawing fresh presences of the intimate.

 

I follow the waves and their crest 

Unmindful of the sands holding the clams.

 

Holding her hand behind the waves, wind

I am entranced by her lovely eyes and feet;

I hope the beach and waves hold hearts here.

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Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on July 15, 2009 10:12:44 PM Report
Abby- Interesting way to picture a walk with a loved one; love on.

 

 

 

---Poetrydad---

Comment By: FreeAmy on April 30, 2009 10:09:48 AM Report
the imagery with this piece is beautiful....the nature scene of the ocean/shore mixed with the image of a man and his woman in love

lovely

~amy

Comment By: Freegrneyedbtch on February 3, 2008 07:59:03 AM Report
lovely!
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on January 2, 2008 11:14:41 AM Report
How tenderly presented, this walk along a sandy beach.  My favorite place is the ocean side, in the evening when it is warm and breezy.  Bare feet leave such impressions....

Beautiful work.  ~Pamela

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 12, 2007 11:52:00 PM Report
I don't know if the beach and waves hold hearts but I know hearts will hold these impressions for a lifetime. =))

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeA.P. on November 8, 2007 12:59:27 AM Report
there is something about the imagery of sand that lends much meaning here for me: the idea of tiny intricate particles, each able to shine in the sun, and always always mingling together, such an intimate depiction, as are your words throughout this poem. effective imagery, i enjoyed.

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on November 6, 2007 05:59:40 AM Report
A different style here but lovely nevertheless...

Ali x

Comment By: FreeGlata on November 5, 2007 10:44:26 AM Report
A beautiful walk along the beach with your words, Abby...I hope that you find the love held right where you want it to be!

Hugs to ya...

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 5, 2007 09:50:51 AM Report
Ahhh,
How so very beautiful....holding hands on the beach with a lover .. the salty air,waves crashing gulls high above and  the soft summer breeze how enchanting
it would be... walking barefoot in the sands
Hugs and Love ~ She





 


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