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Author Name: Freejohncarter 10 Comments
Date Added: October 16, 2007 14:10:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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That Moment

That moment



I have seen
The shimmering silence
On a lake
Where the moon was king.
The giants standing
All around
Waiting for eternal spring.
In that moment
I saw your eyes
Captured by this sweet surprise.
Then I knew.
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Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on November 15, 2007 12:30:25 PM Report
What a lovely share with a lovely love. A well crafted piece of romance. jp
Comment By: FreeGlata on November 2, 2007 02:11:05 PM Report
There's love in nature and nature in love...You've combined the two to create a romantic piece that touches the heart. Fantastic work, John, and I know that you've spoken directly from the soul with this one.


Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on October 23, 2007 03:38:53 AM Report

Simply Romantic!



Comment By: Premiumlionheart on October 17, 2007 03:10:47 PM Report
Written like a true romantic.



Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on October 16, 2007 09:59:06 PM Report
Such a tender write. Knowing is everything.

Splendid write dear!


Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on October 16, 2007 05:11:15 PM Report
Such sweet rapture of knowing...
beautifully presented

Ali x

Comment By: FreeHeike on October 16, 2007 05:09:18 PM Report
The visuals. The atmosphere. Those two people.
John, every word is in the right place here, and I enjoyed this very much.
Comment By: FreeA.P. on October 16, 2007 04:42:59 PM Report
i like the subtle rhymes and the grand imagery throughout this lovely piece.

Comment By: FreeAdri on October 16, 2007 04:32:53 PM Report
You just know hey...  it is how love is.  I love this, it say it all so clearly.  A amazing piece John, with so much meaning!!!!! 
Adri x

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on October 16, 2007 02:34:47 PM Report
The eyes are the windows to our you knew. How sweet and romantic John.


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