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Author Name: Freejohncarter 11 Comments
Date Added: October 12, 2007 14:10:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Colours

Colours

 

 

To paint the colour of my love
To sketch or capture
That curve of desire would be
The key to the fire
That lays dormant inside.
I would run, not hide
For when two hearts collide
In an explosion of colour
My life would be
The warmest hue my eyes
Could ever paint
And her eyes no one
Could ever taint.

 

 

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Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on October 23, 2007 03:41:13 AM Report
 

An explosion of colour is what we all desire in our hearts, Nice Write John

 

Lyn.

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on October 15, 2007 02:40:50 PM Report
When two hearts collide the colors are extra vibrant and her eyes cannot be tainted when your love for her stays strong. Beautiful John.
Helen

Comment By: Freeb doneff on October 13, 2007 01:52:20 AM Report
So much to be said about the way we see things, and others, when we are in that "L" mode.  Our perspective on things is different. Nothing is impossible, because we have someone there beside us; nothing is as sweet, as when we share it, and the world becomes a  much better place when we have love on our side. And yes, even the colours are brighter, as though the whole place just opened up to us and is ours for the taking. I Imagined this in a soft watercolor..
b
Comment By: FreeA.P. on October 13, 2007 12:26:07 AM Report
the last lines/rhyme made the whole poem for me, it drew it away from the artist/love poem genre into something deeper.
an enjoyable read.


Comment By: Premiumlionheart on October 12, 2007 05:25:55 PM Report
The sound of colour...and love. That's what this is.

Really beautiful poem sir.

 

Richard

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 12, 2007 04:57:25 PM Report
John ,
The Vivid colors of .....Love with all its embracing rapture..luster of colors within the eyes of love..simply beautiful...
 Sounds like a man falling in the arms of breathless seduction
 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on October 12, 2007 04:40:21 PM Report
I see a confidence in your expression builiding all the time
its great

Ali x

Comment By: FreeAdri on October 12, 2007 04:35:11 PM Report
Oh how utterly beautiful!  You are right, with love explodes, the colours will the most beautiful ever seen.  This is so beautiful, I am in awe. 
Adri x
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 12, 2007 04:19:11 PM Report
If love ain't the answer, it will do 'til the real thing comes along...Just lovely...len
Comment By: FreeGlata on October 12, 2007 03:37:24 PM Report
Well stated, John...The colours of love are rich and vibrant indeed!

Hugs and smiles...

Glata

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on October 12, 2007 03:14:34 PM Report
thats such a heartwarming poem to read john, i wish i could write in someways like that, i'm not really a lovey guy i try to write some for my g/f but they just dont come out as i want them too, for them to be sweet and loving, i cant seem to make them that way
oh well i'll keep trying great write
~Robin





 


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