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Author Name: Freela-la908 3 Comments
Date Added: September 17, 2007 00:09:41 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Wish Master

Grant me freedom

So I can fly high.

Let me soar above them,

Exploring the deep blue sky.

 

Let them all see,

Just what they did to me.

The pain and suffering,

Restraining me from being free.

 

If you give me three,

Or even just one.

I'll appreciate life,

For it will have begun.

 

Magically appear,

Grant me a wishful chance.

I want to soar through the skies,

So I and the clouds can dance.

 

 

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMicky McMaster on July 4, 2009 12:40:51 AM Report
your already soaring with this one,Mahalarose
nicely done

Micky

Comment By: FreeGlata on September 17, 2007 02:57:57 PM Report
Reach for your destiny hon...you deserve a chance to fly! Whether or not they ever see the damages of what they've done to you, just revel in the chance to soar above their imprisoning...And if you're up there flying, lol, you might want to consider what the birds do to cars ;o) Imagine the mess they'd be wiping off the tops of their heads!!!!! (giggles)

 

One thing you might want to consider...

First line, second stanza...should be "Let them all SEE"...

Great job Mahala!

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 17, 2007 09:14:01 AM Report
Mahala, Perhaps you may get your wish... THank you for your kind comments on my poems.. Hugs ~ She Whispers





 


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