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Author Name: Freefanofjims 8 Comments
Date Added: September 16, 2007 11:09:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Finding Words~3

Finding Words

 

Is the end of time now getting closer

As police and thugs pull guns from holsters

Bullets are flying and people are dying

Mothers and fathers are out there crying


Crack addicts are watching their backs

Paranoid by imaginary attacks

Dead bodies litter the planets lawn

This moment is gone yet goes on and on

The excuses are lame and always the same

We're stoking the fire and building the flame

Is it a sign we're nearing the end of the line

If I'm feeling sick but my body feels fine

On fresh virgin snow with an everlasting glow

We're writing the ending to our scripted show

Yet we could be mechanics making repairs

Starting right here and spreading to there

Will it be today or is it still years away

This is something that no one here can say

But if the hammer goes click life's gone quick

The time bomb then counts down tick-tick-tick

So I'm wondering how I feel about what's real

Should I still be standing or should I kneel

Is that why I spend so much of my time

Finding words I express to you in a rhyme

Author's Notes:
I wrote this poem somewhere around 7 years ago.
As my writing has progressed over time, I still find it amazing
how the structures of my personal beliefs were built behind the thoughts
contained in some of my poetry and its descriptions of this existence.
They say the answers to life are a rabbit hole of information we either choose
to ignore or explore within our minds unlimited ability to obtain.
Of course it is also said that if we attempt wandering too far past our personal
levels of sanity, the outcome has led to an inability to exist between the known
and unknown dimensions of documented explanations of reality.
In other words a writer tends to allow their imagination unlimited boundaries.
So, what if they discovered the answers that explained life in ways the world
has yet to understand but were no more than ordinary men.
Imagine having that kind of information yet not being able to get many to listen,
much less believe any portion of what they explain as truth.
Because we were never meant to prove the truth of life.
It is the structure of our belief alone that provides that answer.
Peace~
James
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLORETTA PITILLI on August 10, 2009 07:16:36 AM Report

A search for what is real. being there with our arms around our own integrity.  Peace  Loretta

Comment By: FreeKimber Turpin on May 19, 2008 11:18:15 PM Report
James, this is a power house of a piece! As always - you have penned an exceptional piece for all to read, feel and ponder over.

Hugs,
The Gypsy

Comment By: FreeAngel on April 16, 2008 01:59:07 PM Report
James this was superb. Very powerful write.The message is so very wise. Wonderful

 

 

love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeAntony Frank on October 22, 2007 01:39:48 PM Report
Powerful work.  Has a strong message.

 

Regards,

 

Antony.

Comment By: FreeKelli on October 10, 2007 10:04:58 AM Report
James ,

 

Your writing is very good. This piece has such a powerful message. I enjoyed reading the "about" part as well.

 

Take care, Kelli

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on September 19, 2007 08:46:31 AM Report
such a brutal truth spread throughout this whole write, thanks for sharing your great wisdom,
brilliant poem james
~Robin

Comment By: FreeGlata on September 17, 2007 09:03:00 AM Report
Dear James...

This write is a powerful reminder to all of us who turn a blind eye to the reality that is all around us. We can hid behind a facade of "everything's wonderful" and miss the fact that the world is dying right under our very noses. How sad is that???

Your ability to put the truth out there in black and white never ceases to amaze me, and this is a prime example of your talent.

Great write, as always!

Hugs from your sis...

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 17, 2007 08:55:41 AM Report

This poem is most powerful I think we as poets always must find a way to express our thoughts about life any way we can!! I really enjoyed this few lines it says it all.
~ She Whispers


So I'm wondering how I feel about what's real


Should I still be standing or should I kneel


Is that why I spend so much of my time


Finding words I express to you in a rhyme






 


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