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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 5 Comments
Date Added: September 09, 2007 23:09:58 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Baptized In love

Right from the start  of there
very  first meeting


It seemed like soul mate
hearts finally started beating

 Hands touched and hearts felt
without sound  in the world  of
sparkling velvet  space

As two lonely people looked
at pictures and admired  at each
others lonely face

 Two people  reaching to listen
and read  every love word  from
their heart spoken

After  shattered hearts and
trembling tears had  left them both
shaken and broken

They want to cling with loves
living green vine

 The  sweet tasting  grapes
of loves seductive wine

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They were baptized  in there
passions of wild fires


Loves  sweet lips that eagerly cling
to each others needing desires


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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngel on September 21, 2007 01:30:25 PM Report
Now you are talking beauty in words my friend

 

They were baptized  in there
passions of wild fires


Loves  sweet lips that eagerly cling
to each others needing desires



Bravo words that cut the the core of the heart

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on September 11, 2007 02:29:14 AM Report
The sweet tasting grapes......love that line. Have always thought of a good wine in a romantic context. You paint the picture well. jp
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 10, 2007 01:54:54 PM Report
I do believe that life brings us what we trully set our hearts upon.

Ali x

Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on September 10, 2007 11:20:53 AM Report
Love at its best.
You are a gifted writer
Love to you Dear One!

Yours .............Fletch

Comment By: Freeabby on September 10, 2007 08:16:32 AM Report
SHE,

Your love poems are sweet as wine.

This one equally from line to line

is so gorgeous and fine.

 

Abby   





 


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