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Author Name: Freesybilvane 9 Comments
Date Added: September 09, 2007 12:09:29 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Leipzig

Look into the burning mirror

If you're not afraid of its hellfire laughter

 

You've never been at the heart of things

Too many considerations blocking the way

Bright spots of fear

Black caverns of shame

 

If you look closely

There's light in the ground

And amid the spires justice still stands tall

 

If you missed the vocational training*

You will have to bear the uncertainty

Of each chiming hour

 

"Be good, be bad, just be"

Again, the stones are wiser than you are

 

Part the clouds in good faith

Draw a green breath

Then wander on

 

Author's Notes:

* Leipzig is the only city in Germany with a college teaching how to become a writer of fiction, poetry included.

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Comments:
Comment By: Freeaaron payne on December 3, 2008 12:31:47 PM Report
"Be good, be bad, just be"

excellent.
aaron

Comment By: FreeEric on May 27, 2008 02:13:48 AM Report
\"Be good, be bad, just be\". I think this is a phrase I will internalize, and try to stop being so self-critical. Wonderful work, as usual.
Eric

Comment By: Freeabby on December 16, 2007 06:58:41 AM Report
Beautiful, always beautiful celebrating creative individuals and places that provoke creativity
Comment By: FreeHelen on November 6, 2007 02:00:21 PM Report

I didn't know that about Leipzig. I wonder how this training goes. I wonder if I'd want to be trained to become a poet or a writer of fiction...


Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on October 1, 2007 11:40:12 AM Report
fantastic Heiki!

In the first three stanzas I was given an inner vision...
such was the power...
the last two stanzas speak to me of the need to just keep going...yes, we all need to draw a green breath
Love your work

Ali x

Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on September 17, 2007 06:18:56 PM Report
Very interesting work, Heike, full of allusion and fascinating images. Is the "burning mirror" a reference to the invention of an array of mirrors by Archimedes which, when directed so that they reflected the heat of the sun, are said to have been able to burn the boats of invaders? I get the impression that this poem is about cities and, by extension, people having the ability to come to terms with their dark past and face the future with hope and faith in the future. I love the line "Be good, be bad, just be". Good advice. Good poem.
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 13, 2007 05:20:48 PM Report
Very nice, Heikie..Your poetry always has a hard edge that I admire...len
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on September 11, 2007 05:56:23 PM Report

I came, I read, I don't understand it all but it provokes images of a struggle toward wisdom. So I believe I'll just draw a breath and wander on to find that light in the ground. jp


Comment By: Premiumlionheart on September 9, 2007 05:40:49 PM Report
Just being in the presence of places like that carries with it the aura

of greatness. I've been in Germany but never in Leipzig. 

I would like to go some day. This is a very interesting poem.

 

Richard xo





 


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