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Author Name: Freejohncarter 8 Comments
Date Added: September 05, 2007 14:09:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Endless

Endless

 

The smell of rain in your hair

And the look of lust in your eyes

That pick me up in your arms stare

Kick that door open wide without care.

On a bed of endless dreams

We lay

Thunder raging waves crashing

On a shore of evermore

In a timeless everlasting night

I dream and I dream away.

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Comments:
Comment By: Freeabby on October 4, 2007 11:51:37 AM Report
 

One word describes this - wonderful!

Abby

Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on September 22, 2007 09:53:14 AM Report
Sounds like a good eve was had here... Nice one

 

Lyn.

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 10, 2007 02:19:14 PM Report
totally wonderful in its passion and 'devil may care' feeling John
into favs for sure

Ali x

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on September 7, 2007 05:14:19 PM Report
wow very passionate, and powerful, endearing write john,
~Robin

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on September 6, 2007 08:21:50 AM Report

"I dream and I dream away".  Timeless beauty in this piece my friend.


Richard


Comment By: FreeAdri on September 6, 2007 07:27:19 AM Report
Oh this is passion.  Really lovely and romantic and just love.  I love this, really amazing write. 
Adri x

Comment By: Freeb doneff on September 6, 2007 06:17:02 AM Report
Temptuous, passionate, steamy...yes, all good things to dream about. Endless was a good choice for the title..reflects the feelings and ageless love between two people and what they share. I liked the kick down the door part, and  pick me up in your arm's stare...good visuals here.
Happy Writing..
b

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 6, 2007 01:03:17 AM Report
John
 Ahhh ....the romance of loves passion can be endless with two lovers so in love
and needing each other every minute... Oh .. the flity kisses and the rapture of each other....How I remember that passion all to well.
. HUgs ~ Scarlett





 


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