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Author Name: Freela-la908 4 Comments
Date Added: September 02, 2007 01:09:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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You Changed Me

You turned my heart into paper,

So it was easier to rip apart.

But first drew a map on it,

So you'd know where to start.

 

You turned my soul into glass,

So when I fell I'd surely break.

You knew right from the start,

Your love for me was just fake.

 

You turned my mind into the ocean,

So when I cry, I'd drown.

There’s no escaping myself,

Towards the ocean bed I'll sink down.

 

You changed me completely,

So I'd be left totally lost.

I don't know why I loved you,

And I wish our path's never crossed.

 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeTimespell on September 5, 2007 10:47:19 AM Report
Good rhyming style in your poem, and the message is very powerful.
Makes you want to turn the clock back, and repair yourself!

:O)

~T.S~

Comment By: FreeLynn Cowman on September 3, 2007 04:20:11 AM Report
This is a great powerful write, i feel for you in this, as i know only too well how this feels.

 

Blessings to you, and keep writing

Lyn.

Comment By: FreeEmma on September 2, 2007 05:02:19 PM Report
love it.

em.X

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 2, 2007 08:35:33 AM Report
Dear Lady,
, Your heart is so brittle I can tell..Love is such a wonderful thing and yet it can destroy the mind as well..... Hopeing you find your happiness in time.. Maybe it is just time to let go.. It will destroy you dear one... Hugs ~ She Whispers((

You changed me completely,


So I'd be left totally lost.


I don't know why I loved you,


And I wish our path's never crossed.




 


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