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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 3 Comments
Date Added: August 28, 2007 10:08:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Cursed Universe

Somewhere in the distant straggling shadows
of the overcoming perpetual night

There lives a creature that stays away
from the golden dawn of  light

The full moon turns bloody red
Listening to the thoughts of man
and what's in his head

Changing universe stars tumble and spin
now out of control as heartaches try
to once again take hold

Reality skies of scarlet purples with
mourning blacks always bring the
painful memories  they unfold

 Fragmented stardust falls with
alarming sound as the 
burning sun comes crashing down

Flashing lightning and thunder
explodes and screams across 
the defenseless heart

Overwhelming rain drowns the
the soul gasping for air to breath
in its dark

This creature that holds  you in 
this darkness where you learn to hide

Only he sees all the pain and tears
you have lived and cried



 

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Comment By: FreeAngel on October 25, 2007 01:59:41 PM Report

Overwhelming rain drowns the
the soul gasping for air to breath
in its dark


This creature that holds  you in 
this darkness where you learn to hide


Only he sees all the pain and tears
you have lived and cried



As the pain and tears flow onward

 

Hugs

 

Excellent

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on August 28, 2007 12:59:16 PM Report
couldn't ask for anything better, truly astounding, beautiful portraying, as usual you leave me speechless,
~Robin

Comment By: Freeabby on August 28, 2007 11:49:05 AM Report

What a poem and what an ending!


- Only he sees the pain and tears

   you have lived and cried.

 

 I have always admired your poetry SHE

and am still dazzled each time I read your verses.

 

 





 


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