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Author Name: ModeratorJillian Alexis 5 Comments
Date Added: August 25, 2007 21:08:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Once upon a time, in the ~LAND OF SHADOWS~, there lived a ~VIXEN~ of a witch, ~SENSUAL SORCERESS~. ~SHE~ lived in a Castle with her ~FLUFFY ANGEL~ step-daughter, ~SNOW FEATHERS~. Her ~ALTER EGO~ despised this ~INNOCENT~, ~LIQUID POETRESS~, for ~SHE~ was a ~SWEET GIRL~ who had ~BLUE GREEN~ eyes and ~BLACK VELVET RAVEN~ hair.

Everyday ~SHE~ would summon the ~POET GRANDMASTER~ to inquire of him, "Who is the fairest in all the ~LAND OF SHADOWS~"? He would always reply, "You are a ~MEGALOMANIAC~, and the ~SWEET GIRL~ with ~BLUE~ eyes, ~ALWAYS AND FOREVER~ will be the ~SHOOTING STAR~ in the ~LAND OF SHADOWS~.

This angered the Queen, a ~PYROMANIAC~, and she demanded, "Why couldn't you have simply said, "~ITS JUST ME~", to which he replied, "Because ~YOU ASK~".

This ~BROKEN~, ~LOST SOUL~ summoned a ~WARRIOR~. ~SHE~ told him of her ~ABYSSIC DEMISE~. "Take ~SNOW FEATHERS~ into the forest, near the ~CREEK END~ and ~STEAL LIFE~ from this ~LIQUID POETRESS~. Bring me back her heart, as proof that ~SHE~ is a ~LIVING DEAD GIRL~. Tell her that you are taking her there to ~RIDE THE WAVES~".

So, ~THAYT BOY~ took her deep into the ~SABERIOUS SHADE~, near the ~CREEK END~.
This ~TORN APART~, ~FLOETIC SOLDIER~ wrote to her on ~PEN AND PAPER~ of the Queen's ~DARK SOUL~, and her ~ENDLESS SORROW~. He then said, "~BEHIND THESE HAZEL EYES~ dwells a ~REBELIOUS~, ~HEART OF A WARRIOR~. I am only an ~AVERAGE JOE~, who will set you ~FREE AT LAST~, ~LIL LADY~. Never return to the ~LAND OF SHADOWS~ again. Beware of the ~HIDDEN DRAGON~, the ~LUSTFUL COYOTE~, and the ~BIGGBEAR~".

As this ~RAZORBLADE ROMANTIC~ returned to the Castle, he threw his ~JAVEL~ and took back with him a ~LIONHEART~, to present to the Queen. ~SHE~ saw the ~LIONHEART~ and her ~BITTER LAUGHTER~ could be heard throughout the Castle.

In the meantime, this ~INNOCENT GURL~ cried ~FROZEN TEARS~, for ~SHE~ was ~LOST AND ALONE~. She became weary, but continued to repeat, "~I WILL KEEP GOING~".

At the ~CROSSROAD~ this ~SHORT AND CUTE~, ~SEXYYIBABY GIRL~, stumbled upon a very, small house. There was a ~MYSTERIOUS LIGHT~ glowing from within, so ~SHE~ entered, as her ~KITTY KAT DESIRE~ over-ruled her common sense. There were seven, tiny beds with names above each one;  ~SMILES~, ~SHORTY~, ~MISUNDERSTOOD~, ~SERENITY~, ~UNWANTED~, ~HYDROKAT~, and ~STUMBLEINE~. ~SHE~ tidied up the house, and even washed down the ~BLUE~ walls.

~SHE~ then heard seven voices outside, singing a ~FORGOTTEN SONG~. This ~BASKETBALL CHIC~ cried ~SALTY~ tears, for she was afraid each ~DIRTY BOY~ would be angry with her for entering their home. ~SHE~ was sure it would become ~ELECTRIC MAYHEM~. They offered her some ~BRANDY~ and ~GIN~, and they made her ~GIGAL~. ~SHE~  assumed they were ~RICH~, for they possessed many ~JEWELZ~.  Then they all went to bed.

~SHE~ layed down and closed her ~BABY BLUE~ eyes. When ~SHE~ awoke the next morning, the ~FINAL FORMATION~ were gone, working at the ~JADE~ mines.

While they were away, the Queen learned that this ~FLUFFY ANGEL~ was still alive and also of her whereabouts. Her ~HEART FULL OF SORROW AND PAIN~ was once again ~TORN APART~. ~SHE~ sprinkled poisonous ~FAIRY DUST~ upon an ~ORANGE COCONUT~, and dressed herself in a ~SHROUD OF BLACK~. ~SHE~ climbed on the back of a ~DRAGON WINGED WOLF~, and flew to where ~SNOWFEATHERS~ was.

Disguised as ~THE BAGLADY~, ~SHE~ had very ~CRUEL INTENTIONS~. ~SNOWFEATHERS~ saw this ~BRIEF VISITOR~ from the window, and ran out to greet her. This ~SUICIDAL DREAMER~ asked, "~HAVE U SEEN MY PENGUIN~", to which this ~PINKLADY~ answered, "No, but I have seen a ~HAPPY BUNNY~". ~THE BAGLADY~ offered ~SNOWFEATHERS~ the ~ORANGE COCONUT~. As ~SHE~ took a bite, this ~WIND WHISPERER~ thought, "~ONLY MOMENTS REMAIN~".

The Seven Midgets returned home to find a ~CHANGED WOMAN~. ~SHE~ was a ~SLEEPY MOMMY~ who had fallen under the ~COMBAT KILLER PRINCESS~ spell. They all cried ~SILVER TEARS~, for they were ~CAUGHT~ up in ~PAIN AND LOVE~. Only the kiss from a Prince would awaken this ~MORNING DOVE~. They placed her in a casket of ~CRYSTAL, TEARS~ running down their face's. They had never known such ~ENDLESS SORROW~.

The next morning, ~PRINCE CHARMONT~ drove by in his ~JAG~. He noticed the sleeping, ~POETIC PRINCESS~, and kissed her lip's. The spell was broken!

Everyone was feeling ~DUCKIE~, except for the ~SENSUAL SORCERESS~, who cried ~DARK TEARS~ and shouted ~DEATH TO THE DARK~.

~PRINCE CHARMONT~ ask the ~POETIC PRINCESS~, ~HEART2HEART~, to become his ~CHAOTIC BRIDE~, and presented her with a ~CHRYSANTHEMUM~. This ~MORNING DOVE~ answered, "I am ~AFRAID OF THE NEW~", to which he replied, "I would be ~BROKEN DOWN~ if you refused to be my ~PINKLADY~". ~SHE~ accepted and they drove away in his ~JAG~. And everyone lived happily-ever-after....THE END.
Author's Notes:
I wrote this quite a long time ago, as a dedication to the Creative-Poems members. I did not intend to leave anyone out, I simply ran out of names to use. If this story offends anyone, I apologize. Just let me know and I will remove your' name. This was written with the  utmost respect for the members on this site. Thank you to all who read this.
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Comment By: FreeQuiltingLady on September 9, 2007 07:38:36 PM Report
I enjoyed reading this very much.  I thought you used the usernames extremely well.  :o)


Comment By: FreeMichael Barnicle on August 27, 2007 10:52:03 PM Report
This is a really cute write actually, and of course I don't mind being in there. Especially because it would leave a little gap there that looks fine how it is. But again great write. Really cool idea!

-Mike Barnicle

Comment By: Premiumlionheart on August 26, 2007 09:42:29 AM Report

Thanks for reposting this. I enjoyed it.

You have quite an imagination.

Richard xo

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 26, 2007 12:54:48 AM Report
Tiger rose... This is awesome write.. your friends will love this!! Your talent remains in the poets book...
HUgs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 25, 2007 10:17:24 PM Report
Jillian:  this is incredible!!  Very cute........


Lady D


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