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Author Name: FreeWishfulSinful 5 Comments
Date Added: April 01, 2012 16:04:59 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sorry I Missed You

Sorry I Missed You

I have one thousand
empty notes
I sang silently
online
In tune with my stoned revolt
With the keys 
I could never find

 

I have one thousand
empty lines
which I have cast out
with my bait
I have lost more 
from being kind
than I gained from
feeling great

 

I have one thousand
empty words
which I never plan to keep
anything from anyone
who will listen when I speak

 

I have one thousand
lonely hands
which have never felt
so much
I have filled them up
with the emptyness
of all
 they'll ever touch
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeFilthy on April 3, 2012 07:11:54 PM Report
That second stanza is just brilliant.


Comment By: FreeFirestone Feinberg on April 2, 2012 01:44:46 PM Report
I have one thousand good words to say about this poem -- but there isn't enough space to write them here...  well... just one:  'Super!'    --David
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on April 2, 2012 03:21:22 AM Report
Absolutely excellent writing a real joy to read and re-read if this were a recipe it would be delicious and moorish BRAVO Chuck~Graham.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 1, 2012 06:12:37 PM Report


This is just amazing I had to read it twice.... I have always enjoyed your poems....

 Great to have you back....

 Always ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLubaina on April 1, 2012 04:19:08 PM Report
KEEP  ENJOYING  LIFE AND WHAT U ARE WRITING!!




 


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