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Author Name: FreeLen 17 Comments
Date Added: July 16, 2006 23:07:32 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Vision In The Moonlight

 

I saw you whizzing

In the moonlight
In the meadow
by the stream
I saw a vision
In the moonlight

And you looked just like a dream

From that moment on
I've loved you
Since I saw you
squatting there
With the starlight
up above you
And the moonlight
in your hair


{Bridge}

I saw you whizzing
In the moonlight
In the meadow
by the stream
I saw a vision
In the moonlight

And you looked just like a dream

I saw an angel
In the moonlight
Your beauty left me weak
I will always dream of that night
when I watched you-

spread your cheeks

{Bridge}

I saw you whizzing
In the moonlight
In the meadow
by the stream
I saw a vision
In the moonlight

And you looked just

 

like a dream..

 

 
Author's Notes:
I was trying here to achieve the perfect balance of romantic imagery and body functions.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAmy on May 22, 2009 12:42:22 AM Report
lol ....you're a nut! My ex in-laws caught me on the side of the road near the treeline once. My ex and I were lost (trying to find their new lakehouse) when they drove up and saw my husband sitting in the car on the side of the road. They asked where I was and he pointed...lol. They waved.

Loved the listen and the read.

~Amy

Comment By: FreeMoonStar on October 5, 2008 06:06:43 PM Report

Ahhhhh... Wow!!!! As soon as I stop laughing I shall finish!!!


 


 


Okay back!!!


I was listening and at first didn't understand the word you were saying.. Then I heard "Whizzing".......

Then it hit me what you meant!!!!

 

 

Len you are a complete loon, but a one that I shall love with all my being forever and a day!!!! This, my friend, is going in my fav list!!!!

You had me laughing so hard I had to run to go take a Whizz!

Spit the coffee I was drinking right out of my mouth too!!!!!

 

You are a riot and I wish all others were just like you that I meet..

My world would be a better place.. "You betcha by golly"!

 

 

Hugs,

~MoonStar~

Comment By: FreeQuiltingLady on June 8, 2007 02:40:50 PM Report
*blushing* I thought I was all alone!  Hey, I listened and thought it was great, deep and melodious...bo doh de oh doh!  :o)

Pen

Comment By: PremiumVizualEnsemble on December 21, 2006 05:16:16 PM Report
HILARIOUS!! I read it and laughes my a** off :)....Then

I just had to listen to it......it took 23 minutes for this stupid

media player to buffer, but honey.....it was worth the wait. Your voice...

amazing!...I laughed even more....this is great Len.........well you should

know that...you are the best!! Thanks for the laughs, and for

sharing that sexy voice :).......I will have to listen to more :).

~Penny~

Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on October 13, 2006 01:01:32 PM Report
Oh, NO!  Voyeurism at its... HINDest!
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on September 26, 2006 09:06:59 PM Report
I fine write Len! As I listened to your voice, I pictured you working it like Joe Cocker for some reason.

Made me smile.

Keith

Comment By: FreeAlex on July 21, 2006 07:10:36 PM Report

Comment By: FreePelagic Mind on July 17, 2006 09:08:35 AM Report
Remarkable! Memorable! and Deep!... the line that says it all for me is "Bo de o' do" and for me must rank up there with Frank Sinatra's  top bit of whiz "Doo be doo be doo".... From Starngers In the Night!.......hahahahaha!
Comment By: FreeAdri on July 17, 2006 08:13:41 AM Report

ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!  Brilliant!  J is right, you are too much!!!  A very very ORIGINAL concept Len...  lmao!! This is things people make movies off!!  I can honestly say, no love song has ever been written like this.  It is a first.  Great write, like always, from the master, of course!!
Adri x


Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on July 16, 2006 02:27:48 AM Report
God, len. I didnt know you were a peeping tom and a pervert at that! just kidding. Great job len. I enjoyed this alot.
Comment By: FreeLinear Z on March 24, 2006 09:15:29 PM Report
LOL very well done Len. I believe you have acheived your goal. I loved this! LOL
Comment By: FreeSavanahB on July 6, 2005 11:30:52 PM Report
OMG Len, a golden shower in the moonlight, the challenge of keeping dry shoes and the danger of poison ivy... God, it has all of the elements of a truely great write! Jude...Love this , boyo, it is a relief to have found it!
Comment By: AdminRichardM on June 26, 2005 11:48:01 PM Report
Yes. and the ultimate of necessity, no doubt!
Rich
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 8, 2003 10:58:09 PM Report
Leonard, you are truly one individual!! Very cute.
Comment By: FreeJason Brown on September 29, 2003 11:24:51 PM Report
lol Great Len
Jason Brown
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 7, 2003 07:06:03 PM Report
Ahhhhhhhh....I loved it~!
You must just be bubbling
over with thoughts on this
one...
Margaret.... *****
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 7, 2003 01:55:52 AM Report
WOW. THIS I SOMETHING ELSE...DIFFERENT..BUT NEET!! YOUR GREAT..THIS HAS GOT TO BE LOVE!!!




 


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