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Comment By:  Cynthia Jones on December 2, 2014 06:39:13 PM |
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Rich,
Hello there. I truly enjoyed reading this piece of poetry. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it.
*S* Cynthia
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Comment By:  LindaM on February 6, 2013 12:40:15 AM |
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I found this beauty while looking up the works of writers I enjoyed when I was at CP a few years back.
Your talent is so obvious in this beautiful piece. It invokes romantic imagery and tenderness. Beautifully written.
Linda
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| Comment By: HOPE on September 29, 2011 06:05:28 PM |
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Rich
A lovely and enticing poem. Describing what everyone wants a linger touch with no agenda's. You perfectly express being in the moment with another.
Tina
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| Comment By: wislar on August 29, 2011 12:32:18 AM |
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My first read of any your writes.....................I like..............been here since a while ago and am sorry I never read yours before................or maybe I did and don't remember................am back I think..........with thoughts and words to share.........thanks for the space................
wislar
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| Comment By: She Whispers on June 22, 2011 11:38:13 PM |
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Richard... How in the world did I miss this...
The love of your life.... In poetry .....
So beautiful to read... I have missed your love poesm sure hope your still so happy!!1
Always ~ She Whispers
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| Comment By: Terry Russell on May 31, 2010 07:43:23 PM |
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Very beautiful poem Richard. Enjoyed the read.
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| Comment By: Dan J. Mazurek on April 22, 2010 12:31:27 PM |
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You nail this to all of our hearts
I going back to chalk board
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| Comment By: sHeRi on April 8, 2010 08:27:08 PM |
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Very inspiring and romantic piece. I enjoyed this very much Richard.
Thanks for sharing this-Sheri
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| Comment By: Thomas Heath on February 1, 2010 11:43:27 AM |
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This poem is exceptionally well written. The rhyme scheme and the structure of the poem made for amazing flow.
Well Done!
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| Comment By: Mary Lou Allen on November 19, 2009 09:38:51 AM |
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This is as lovely and romantic as ever. I love reading it. Hope all is well with you, Rich. ML
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| Comment By: LORETTA PITILLI on November 2, 2009 08:02:42 AM |
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Precious moments like these...are no accident...a revelation of something shared in our past lives. Enjoyable write loretta
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| Comment By: Don Romeo on October 10, 2009 01:29:26 PM |
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very touching poem enjoyed reading this keep it up
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| Comment By: joey on October 2, 2009 09:46:03 PM |
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This is a beautiful poem in many ways the ryming the structure the flow of the poem
and just so enjoyable to read
P.S Thank you for keeping this wonderful site open for all to share thier poetry
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| Comment By: Shuberth Dias on August 27, 2009 01:00:49 PM |
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its so beautiful and i enjoyed reading it, you are very talented and it makes me happy to see that our website owner is so gifted and talent in his work, where as other website owners i have been on another websites who dont write and some write but their writes are arent good and beautiful like your poems are. they just host a website just as a business for them. but here its good to see the way you give it all into poetry and very intrested and knows what it means and how it can help others.
this was a great write !
Shuberth
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| Comment By: maggie lopez sherry wilbur on August 26, 2009 11:46:48 PM |
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Well by now you have heard it all , but to hear it one more time won't hurt. This is beautiful, stunning. brought me back to my perfect date. I was there all over again. Always Maggie.
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| Comment By: The Bag Lady on August 2, 2009 10:52:08 PM |
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Simply devine in every sense of the word, Rich....Beautifully written with a romantic flow that brings the reader through what was in your heart and soul...MAGNIFICENT....
Huggles,
Margaret...
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| Comment By: Ella on June 1, 2009 05:46:12 PM |
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life´s constant is change.... oh yes... still trying to relax with that definitive fact.. the beauty helps, like this beautiful writing ;)
thanks!
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| Comment By: Blake Hightdudis on April 3, 2009 04:07:53 PM |
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Excellent piece, brings the reader along on the journey.
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| Comment By: Angelface on January 2, 2009 11:38:13 AM |
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I absolutely adore this write Mr. Richard! You certianly have away with words. Happy New Year, and God Bless You and Yours.
xx Angelface xx
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| Comment By: Bruce A. Peaslee on December 24, 2008 02:28:51 PM |
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Richard - I enjoyed this work, partly because I, on December 1st saw and took a picture of the the Moon,Venus, and Jupiter. The gist of the poem and the romantic is nice.
---Poetrydad---
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| Comment By: Alison Storm Wolf on November 11, 2008 01:56:10 PM |
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Simply lovely Rich..
so nice to see your romantic side ;-)
Ali x
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| Comment By: Lubaina on October 20, 2008 04:52:13 PM |
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This is an excellent write in very good taste.I really enjoyed reading this. Well done.
Lubs.
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| Comment By: Eli D. on October 18, 2008 02:18:43 PM |
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This is a wonderful poem! The imagery of the moon and venus with its parallels to the departed, soft reminders, soft language with a warm meaning, well done! -Eli
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| Comment By: Raymond Pinsonneault on September 22, 2008 07:24:26 PM |
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Loved it Richard from "life's constant is change to things lining up just right."
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| Comment By: Roger Bacon on July 29, 2008 07:35:04 PM |
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Hey Richard. Been a long time. Wonderful verse here and hope this is your life these days.
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| Comment By: jess on July 24, 2008 11:53:15 AM |
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This is a great piece....I enjoyed reading every bit of it...
Hope you have a great day
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| Comment By: S on July 22, 2008 07:19:09 PM |
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great poem man
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| Comment By: Mujtaba H Zaidi on July 17, 2008 10:30:38 PM |
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What a superb description of imaginative feelings under the gorgeous objects of nature... really amazing poem dear sir!
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| Comment By: Cindy Bendel on July 6, 2008 10:54:09 AM |
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Just exquisite Richard. A finer piece of poetry I have not read.
Into my faves.
~Cindy xo
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| Comment By: Graham Jones on June 29, 2008 01:56:51 AM |
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I can see you have lost none of your touch Richard, always a pleasure to read your work and as always I was not disappointed by what I found~Graham.
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| Comment By: Brittany on May 24, 2008 08:40:52 PM |
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This is really good! You have the perfect flow with the words, and great rhyming also! Dont think I could've done it better myself! :)
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| Comment By: Kimber Turpin on May 20, 2008 10:51:43 PM |
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What a beautiful piece to read and enjoy! Thank you for sharing it with everyone.
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| Comment By: Samuel E. Stone on April 28, 2008 01:45:20 PM |
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An excellent write, simple yet with depth... Enjoyed...
Wishing you well...
Sam
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| Comment By: SilkinTears on April 15, 2008 11:50:53 PM |
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Very touching Rich...love can only be with understanding and no hidden agenda's. I liked the ending where there was a sense of hanging on to those beautiful moments.
Helen
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| Comment By: Lorraina on April 7, 2008 05:09:32 PM |
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sweet romance, a dance, Moonlight, the binding of hearts,
just lovely... Connie
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| Comment By: FLETCHER on April 7, 2008 03:42:41 PM |
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Wonderful Write.
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| Comment By: Stephen Owen AKA Passion Hawk on January 8, 2008 02:00:08 PM |
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from the heart,very touching Rich,gr8 write,steve
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| Comment By: Joe Petro on December 10, 2007 01:37:31 PM |
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Romance is alive and well. I find this piece very soothing. Merry Christmas Richard. jp
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| Comment By: MISS_VEE on December 1, 2007 04:12:40 PM |
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This reminds me of the tide ebbing and flowing by my shore....so calm and relaxing.
You're right life is beautiful and love with the right person can complete it, wonderful inspiring write xxx
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| Comment By: Lynn Cowman on November 4, 2007 03:05:38 PM |
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A beautiful heartfelt piece..
Lyn..
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on September 18, 2007 09:53:47 PM |
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"how beautiful life can be,
When things line up just right."
Ain't THAT the truth, buddy?...I really liked the old-fasioned romance in this write..The world needs more of it..Len
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| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on September 1, 2007 01:07:36 PM |
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Agendas have a way of stifling the music. Sweet magic is created when persons of like minds can embrace the pleasure of an experience in the moment when joy is bursting with life and do it without the burden and expectations of a hidden agenda.
Lovely presentation and subject matter Richard, I felt a wonderful freedom when I read this poem and the unity of like minds!
~Barbara~
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| Comment By: Glata on August 28, 2007 01:42:53 PM |
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Absolutely beautiful, Rich...It's good to hear the peace and contentment in your words now. This says much more than the words on the screen reveal...
Lovely work!!
Hugs...
Glata
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| Comment By: noah count on August 2, 2007 09:36:31 PM |
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Rich, very touching and nicely done; and on the first day of Gemini to boot. noah
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| Comment By: Micky McMaster on July 22, 2007 09:20:12 PM |
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very beautiful write,Richard
"Of just how beautiful life can be,
When things line up just right."
Micky
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| Comment By: Mary Lou Allen on June 10, 2007 10:32:45 PM |
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Oh, my gosh. This sounds like romance to me. I love it. I truly love it. Just enjoy the sway, Rich. Well done. ML
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| Comment By: She Whispers on June 8, 2007 09:34:17 AM |
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Rich...Love is amazing and how it changes the mind and heart.... Love in your eyes I bet its such a great feeling...Wishing you many beautiful dawns with her.... Hugs ~ She Whispers
As night's end drew near,
My gaze from you withdrawn,
The right thing, sweet friend,
Make room for another dawn.
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| Comment By: Wide Awake on June 8, 2007 09:24:21 AM |
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This is beautiful, Richard!
A very masterful and heartfelt poem it is.
Excellent~
***** !! :o)
Hugs,
Pamela
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