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Author Name: FreeSensual Sorceress 26 Comments
Date Added: September 11, 2007 06:09:37 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Longing
The longing beckons, impatiently awaiting
with promises of bittersweet seduction.

It is my consort, whose malefic fingers
casually fondle my breast,
while softly crooning love songs in my ear.
I could easily tumble into endless chasms,
where its dark embrace wraps around me like
silk sheets with lingering scentsedi of spent passion.
 

Take this longing, dredge it up from the recesses
of my soul as a sacrifice to the light.
Perform the ceremonial exorcism
that will free me of this tainted possession.
Lay it upon the altar, pierce its heart
with a clean blade, and cast it into the fire.
As smoke rises from ashes, so shall I.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCathy on July 19, 2008 11:44:12 AM Report
Congratulations on another award you so deserved wow this is suberb in every way very sensual perfect in every word
.......hugs Cathy

Comment By: Freeabby on October 29, 2007 11:20:32 AM Report

I like the shades of love, of questioning, of rejection and overcoming.


The lines are fierce and penetrating. Metaphors like - ceremonial exorcism, malefic fingers,


tainted possession, bittersweet seduction speak loud and deeply too.

Great work J.

Abby

Comment By: Freeb doneff on September 11, 2007 09:29:33 AM Report
Sweetheart, you can rise above anything! You shine while you rise sister, and wow, it is so bright and blinding...
bb, with congrats to you, and sunglasses on..lol

Comment By: FreeLady Literary on August 10, 2007 12:17:28 AM Report
So what were you trying to say here?

 

*lmao* Ok..Point made...quite well at that! *fanning myself*

 

What else can I say except congrats on a HUGELY deserved award!

*hugs*

Lisa

Comment By: FreeTracy Fletcher on August 6, 2007 09:59:14 PM Report
Congratulations on winning a Featured Poem Award Jody.
Tracy

Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on August 6, 2007 11:13:01 AM Report
Yep.  Congrats on your award!
Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on August 6, 2007 03:27:52 AM Report
This was, as ever,  a certainty. Even before you posted, this had winner all over it. In fact, if you read between the lines of this one, that is exactly what it says: "This is a featured poem". That, and "I'm pretty, give me money".

Well done, pet.

Comment By: FreeChuck on August 6, 2007 01:52:09 AM Report

Congratulations...I love how it ends.... I is powerful and deep...alone and free......just one simple letter that means so much...and you've made it rise...and change form...that's a beautiful thought...this is really a masterpiece...and I'm happy you got this award Jolen....


Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 5, 2007 06:35:40 PM Report
Hi Ms S.S.:   this poem can be interpreted several ways, as evidenced by the comments.

So, congratulations on your Feature Poem Award !!!!

 

Lady D

Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on June 20, 2007 04:30:17 PM Report
Can anyone say cliché? For those who can, congratulations. Now get out because this is not the place for the likes of you.
This is a unique a piece as I have read in a while on here. I certainly do not get such things as "the lingering scent of spent passion" from anybody else. That there would be trouble if I did is beside the point.
In such a time when there is nothing new under the sun, it is the mark of the poet to find a voice to relate new meaning rather than to search vainly for a central idea, and, while the theme of this may be universal, the execution is singular.

I could not be prouder of you. 

Comment By: FreeChuck on June 13, 2007 01:37:45 PM Report

There is no death for the unborn

no pleasure

no pain

for the numb.

There is no ledge for them to climb on

Their falling

Their failing

Their done.

 

it's better to long and long than never to long at all... for some reason I don't believe this is about love.

 

I really liked this piece.

Comment By: FreeAdri on June 10, 2007 03:02:06 PM Report
This is so you, it is not even funny...  Beautifully, and as Michael said, skillfully written.  A perfect example of your talent my J. 
Juicy Girl x

Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on June 10, 2007 02:37:21 PM Report
Wonderful! Very skillfully done!
Comment By: FreeRoss McCague Rosco on June 10, 2007 07:30:51 AM Report
Killing me softly.....
Comment By: FreeAngel on June 9, 2007 04:25:50 PM Report
Magnificent. Orgasmic phew raised blood pressure and smiling loads as hubby is home tonight :0)

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: Freetom on June 9, 2007 04:08:01 PM Report
beautiful sensual write Jolen simply irresistable
Comment By: FreeHeike on June 8, 2007 05:47:42 PM Report
Jody, with this piece, you hit us hard and touch us softly... in the way only you can.
Casually deep and violently beautiful.
Great work!
~Heike

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on June 8, 2007 12:50:12 PM Report
yes you will indeed.!!
 great imagery....
Ali x

Comment By: FreeLinear Z on June 8, 2007 12:22:07 PM Report
This is beautiful, Sorceress, I love what you have created here. As always your ability ot weave such vivid images of abstract concepts amazes me. I think this poem is truely wonderful.
I love the passion of this peice, and the twist of perspective half way works perfectly. Changing darkness into light and an internal strugal into a physical release... A beautiful idea.
Love, D.

Comment By: FreeCraig David Dawson on June 8, 2007 10:42:12 AM Report
you are amazing
Comment By: FreeS on June 8, 2007 10:07:50 AM Report
mmm anyone say causally fondle breast?

 

haha

nice poem (everyone is going to think i m a pervert now, great)

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on June 8, 2007 09:49:18 AM Report
Loved this! :o)

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on June 8, 2007 09:48:41 AM Report
WONDERFUL Ms.Sorceress!

Wonderfully written piece of profound wisdom...

How to quelch temptation unbidden...

You wove the seduction so poignantly,
and admonished the unbidden so inarguably...

Excellent use of words as well~

Bravissima! :o)

Hugs,
Pamela


Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on June 8, 2007 04:07:54 AM Report
Absolute wonderful writing Jolen, truely a pleasure to read.
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on June 7, 2007 09:18:49 PM Report
I have to agree with Len on this, this is poetry done with a professional touch. Amazing write Jody.  Henry
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on June 7, 2007 07:49:31 PM Report
Pretty heavy-duty stuff, Aces.. I love this..

"Take this longing, dredge it up from the recesses
of my soul as a sacrifice to the light.
Perform the ceremonial exorcism
that will free me of this tainted possession.
Lay it upon the altar, pierce its heart
with a clean blade, and cast it into the fire.
As smoke rises from ashes, so shall I.
"

It's amazing how mere words, comprised of mere letters can evoke such strong and passionate imagery..This is PRO, darlin'...yereverlovinfurrball 



 





 


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