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Author Name: FreeFireHam 12 Comments
Date Added: May 10, 2007 21:05:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Take

Take

 Take my body and make it your own
Take my thighs and make them your throne
Take my fingers and allow them to explore
Take all of me and then ask for more
 
 Take my lips and let them lavish you insane
Tell my tongue to taste your scarlet champaign
Take me slowly surround me and feel my heat
Take me in until you are made complete
 
Take me in and feel my warm essence flow
My desire, to take you to the highest plateau
When you've taken every ounce of my forte
Take me in your arms for I need your support

 05/10/07

Author's Notes:
So, now someone needs to write a poem entitled, "Give"...
Come on and get those poetic juices flowing...
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Comments:
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on August 6, 2007 10:26:45 AM Report
I'm feeling a little hot and fluttered! :)

nice warm write,

 

LOPEZ X

Comment By: FreeAngel on July 10, 2007 04:03:07 PM Report
Woops wrong comment meant this one below for another write of yours silly me just noticed hormones thats my story lol
Comment By: FreeAngel on June 3, 2007 03:38:50 PM Report


Who Rang That Bell!!


A fire chief had just gotten married and on his honeymoon he informed his new wife that their house was going to be run like a firehouse... he said that they would have sex on the bell system.
He went on to say that one bell meant take your clothes off...
two bells meant get into bed...
and three bells meant start fooling around.
The fire chief came home from work one day and decided to try out his system.... he hollered "One Bell" and she took off her clothes.
He hollered "Two Bells" and she got into bed.
He hollered "Three Bells" and they started fooling around like crazy.
A few minutes later, SHE yells "Four Bells."
"Four Bells?" the fire chief asks, "What is four bells?"
"Let out more hose!" she yelled. "Your nowhere near the fire!"

 

I just couldent help myself :0)

 

It made me think of this joke so had to share it with you!

 

Fantastic write hose me down

 

Love Angelxx


Comment By: Freesherry wilbur on June 1, 2007 08:18:53 AM Report
who'll put out the fires now when our fireman is so damned hot and on fire.  wouch !  hugs sherry
Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on May 24, 2007 05:26:36 PM Report
Steamy Steamy Steamy...Where's the garden hose? Someone's on fire. LOL
Helen

Comment By: FreeNataly Hachem on May 20, 2007 07:49:05 AM Report
A very passionate write, Ham! Burning with desire!! I hope someone replies back with the poem "Give"!!! LOL!!! Mmmm, very interesting! I'd better check She Whispers's page and see if she has kept her promise by writing "Give". I will be back to read your latest poems that I have missed!

Nataly

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on May 14, 2007 01:44:42 PM Report
...for I need your supportE....lol...
Burn baby burn! :o)

Loved this write Hammy...Very creative way of saying what you said without perkng the ears of the youngsters...NICELY done!

Hugs,
Pamela

Comment By: FreeRin Marie on May 13, 2007 11:47:54 PM Report
Wow, I am at a loss for words.....   this is, uh....well its uh...... is it hot in here, or is it just me? :-)

 

This is amazing Ham.  I guess I'll have to visit your page more often, this is some incredibly intense writing. I love it. - You truely have a way with words.

 

Love, Rin

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on May 11, 2007 12:50:59 PM Report
call the fire brigade........... ;-)

Ali x

Comment By: FreeGlata on May 11, 2007 08:48:17 AM Report
The fireman has gone up in a blaze himself! Quite a steamy little write here, and seems that you already have two takers on your challenge...

Quite a stimulation you've provided ,lol!

Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 10, 2007 10:13:09 PM Report
 Ok, Ham, You ask for it.. Like Barbara... SAID.... we will write a poem to this answer..this one..
So your blazing for her with this feverish  desireing heat..
I best cool you down with whispering words that repeat 

Tomorrow I will write a poem for this fire in your heart
.but beware the lovely ladys will attack with burning sparks 

 Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on May 10, 2007 09:48:59 PM Report
OOOOOOOOOH k, somebody dial 911 because Ham is ON FIRE! Cripes...what's a girl supposed to say to this? Hmmm....now let me think... *scratches under her chin* Hey, you know what, seeing that I am the first here, I'm goint to take you up on that offer in the "about" section. I'll write the poem "Give"...now anything can happen here so brace yourself.

 

I think you need a hosing down Ham...lol...oh man, I'm getting such a charge out of this because this is probably one fire you never want to put out. *smiles*

 

~Barbara~





 


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