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Author Name: FreeFireHam 7 Comments
Date Added: April 29, 2007 03:04:44 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Can You See?

Please let me know NOW.

Please tell me if you CAN.

Do you trust me as much as I trust YOU?

This is just something I need to SEE.

Because I consider my feelings to be JUST.

I need to trust you but I donít know HOW.

And I need to know just exactly how MUCH.

This is not a competition between you and I.

Itís whether this is a matter of lust or of LOVE.

When I've your answer, all will be known of THEE.
 
04/28/2007
Author's Notes:

Another poem, which was a challenge...  But a fun one...

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMichelle on April 6, 2009 06:56:26 PM Report
Very well done, seems like it was no challenge at all :)

 

Michelle

Comment By: FreeAngel on June 3, 2007 11:42:10 AM Report
Wow this was so cool. Brilliant

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeSilkinTears on May 1, 2007 11:42:21 PM Report
Well Ham you tackled the challenge very well. Great write...The message ending at each line...very different.

Helen

Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 30, 2007 09:03:11 AM Report
Looks like you rose to the challenge

Ali x

Comment By: FreeGlata on April 30, 2007 08:44:12 AM Report
I love the way this one turned out...you tackled that challenge wonderfully!

The message at the end of each line is beautiful...

Great work!

Hugs...Glata

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 30, 2007 08:19:36 AM Report
Hammy,
 I must admit this is a different style of writing.. I think we all like a challenge when we write.. The message you have sent  .. breaths with passion and your words tremble with excitement as she seem to allure and tease your gentle heart so full of love...Your endearement breaths with rapture to embrace her.. simply lovely ..a love poem from the heart strings of musical love...
Hugs ~ She Whispers

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 29, 2007 11:19:41 AM Report
Oh, this is good and the form you did VERY WELL!!!   Trying new formats are you....

 

Lady D





 


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